quiet letter

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unfettered tides
undress the soul
a sweet surrender

me in you
you in me
slow falling
a wordless wonder

your lips against mine
intoxicating aphrodisiac
shivers down my spine

life in letters
breaths in poetry
me and you
frozen in time

…..

music by the Danish band Bliss

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24 thoughts on “quiet letter

    Noora said:
    February 19, 2014 at 2:48 am

    me in you
    you in me
    slow falling
    a wordless wonder

    … wow, wow – WOW! LOVE this!!

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    Himani B responded:
    February 13, 2014 at 5:46 pm

    oh really? what feeling? tell me. tell meeeee!! many thanks love 😊

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    Merryn said:
    February 12, 2014 at 7:57 am

    Such a musical poem – depth in every word and such deep, believable connection to the theme. Great work! Love it 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:44 pm

      you’re too kind Merryn..thank you so much 😊 appreciate you dropping by here to visit..wishing you all the very best!

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    Zeeshan said:
    February 11, 2014 at 11:01 pm

    Love this! Breaths in poetry is such a lovely line. 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:43 pm

      ofcourse you’d like ‘breaths in poetry’..when it comes easy to you like breathing! 😉 thank you Zeeshan..appreciate your kind feedback!

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        Zeeshan said:
        February 13, 2014 at 10:51 pm

        Thanks and Happy Valentine’s Day, Himani! I hope you enjoy my Valentine’s Day post I just put up.

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    hitandrun1964 said:
    February 11, 2014 at 9:55 pm

    So lovely and the music is wonderful as well.

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:41 pm

      thank you kindly 😊 appreicate it hitandrun!

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    thisoldtoad2014 said:
    February 11, 2014 at 7:10 pm

    Please don’t ever quit writing slowly over and over this is what take for me to learn… i’ve learn a word from you “aphrodisiac” never really took time to look up the real meaning until today…

    Thank You…

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:41 pm

      haha that was the best comment I read that evening Chris! I won’t, if you say so 😊 even I learnt that word a few months back! thank you so much for being here..hope you’re enjoying a lovely day!

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    thisoldtoad2014 said:
    February 11, 2014 at 7:07 pm

    Reblogged this on tot123itsme.

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    Lex Garcia said:
    February 11, 2014 at 6:20 pm

    Once again, this poem hit me in the heart! My new favorite 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:38 pm

      aw thank you Lex! 😊 lovely to hear that..much love!

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    Robert said:
    February 11, 2014 at 3:51 pm

    Greetings,

    I love this so much. The music paints an ambiance that brings me to feel…

    me in you
    you in me
    slow falling
    a wordless wonder

    The words here are so very nice, so evocative of a love that is sensual…and something other.

    Thank you so much for this.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:38 pm

      Greetings Robert, lovely to hear you enjoyed this 😊 you kind words and feedback are much much appreciated! thank you!

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    E.D. said:
    February 11, 2014 at 2:34 pm

    nice you tube… 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:37 pm

      isn’t it?! such great peaceful vibe. thank you E.D.! 😊

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    Morgan said:
    February 11, 2014 at 2:31 pm

    Oh so tenderly beautiful!

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:36 pm

      thanks a lot Morgan, happy to hear you liked it! 😊

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    erobles1963 said:
    February 11, 2014 at 2:13 pm

    Such a wonderfully penned poem full of passion and imagery! 🙂 ~ Phillip

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:35 pm

      thank you Phillip! your kind words are much appreciated 😊

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    Tracesofthesoul said:
    February 11, 2014 at 2:13 pm

    I love your words…I can actually feel them
    our lips against mine
    intoxicating aphrodisiac
    shivers down my spine

    wow!

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:35 pm

      thank you so much Oliana..glad to hear you enjoyed it 😊

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