adrift

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winged freedom
nudging gently
white nakedness
floating midair
quietly fading
in pure light

wild sandalwood burns
scattering freely
diffused thoughts
coming together
flowing apart
slow dancing
to eternal music

leave me here
unto myself
forever adrift
in holy suspension

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53 thoughts on “adrift

    forgottenmeadows said:
    May 15, 2014 at 11:34 am

    Absolutely beautiful Himani!

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      Himani B responded:
      May 15, 2014 at 11:58 am

      Thank you dear Neha 🙂 Have a beautiful one x

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    pearlz said:
    May 13, 2014 at 6:41 pm

    A beautiful match of words and images.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 13, 2014 at 10:50 pm

      Thank you Pearl, much appreciated 🙂

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    Leroy Milton said:
    May 13, 2014 at 8:58 am

    Firstly, I want to thank you for visiting my blog. Your support is greatly appreciated.

    Secondly, this is absolutely beautiful. Your poetry is really nice.

    A follow well earned today!

    Sincerely,

    Leroy M.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 13, 2014 at 5:45 pm

      It’s my pleasure Leroy 🙂 Thank you for stopping by and your very kind words. Wishing you the best and much love!

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        Leroy Milton said:
        May 13, 2014 at 5:52 pm

        No problem, anytime.

        You as well,

        Leroy M.

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    garyfratesstrong said:
    May 13, 2014 at 2:17 am

    Sensuous, seductive…picture and words, as is much of your writing is how I respond…

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      Himani B responded:
      May 13, 2014 at 2:22 am

      Thank you Gary, appreciate your kind words 🙂

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    elaine patricia said:
    May 10, 2014 at 12:58 pm

    Beautiful. I can smell the sandalwood.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 10, 2014 at 1:58 pm

      Thank you Elaine, happy to hear you liked it 🙂

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    charlypriest said:
    May 9, 2014 at 3:03 pm

    Beautiful words. Even I am hanging in suspension.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 3:05 pm

      haha oh Charly! thank you so much 🙂 Sending my good wishes!

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    thephotoseye said:
    May 9, 2014 at 1:22 pm

    Stunning….beautiful words!

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 1:53 pm

      Your kind words are much appreciated 🙂 Have a beautiful one!

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    Laura M Kaminski said:
    May 9, 2014 at 1:20 pm

    Himani B, I must add my voice to this chorus: the whole poem is beautiful, but the last stanza, last line…BREATHTAKING! Thank you so much for posting!

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 1:54 pm

      Thank you so much Laura, happy to hear you resonated! 🙂 Much love and peace.

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    scottishmomus said:
    May 9, 2014 at 12:03 pm

    Washed all over me. Serenely beautiful.x

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 1:55 pm

      Thank you dear Scott, means a lot coming from you 🙂 Stay blessed x

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    b.l. ronan said:
    May 9, 2014 at 4:12 am

    Oh sweet girl. I love the delicateness of this x

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 11:13 am

      Many thanks B, happy to hear you resonated with this 🙂 xx

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    parmis rad said:
    May 9, 2014 at 2:55 am

    I absolutely lived this poem. A pure joy as I read it over now. Thank you!

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 11:14 am

      Thank you Parmis 🙂 Happy to hear you enjoyed it! Best, always.

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    6hellogoodbye9 said:
    May 9, 2014 at 12:45 am

    I love that subtle union and the tinge of darkness as everything drifts apart only to come together with the slow dancing… Urgency and calm, joy and paranoia – I think that’s what “holy suspension” really is for a lot of people, and I love how you’ve just NAILED it! That state of everything and anything just beautifully coexisting. It’s a wondrous realm you’ve created with this one!

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 11:16 am

      And I love your comment! How do you write like that? haha Appreciate your kind words, thank you so much 🙂 x

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        6hellogoodbye9 said:
        May 9, 2014 at 11:46 am

        Haha if it helps I don’t know either 😛
        Anytime for all your lovely work though Himani! 😀

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          Himani B responded:
          May 9, 2014 at 1:56 pm

          You’re sweet, thank you! 🙂 x

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    shereenaljarrah said:
    May 9, 2014 at 12:21 am

    In holy suspension 🙂 wow

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 12:28 am

      Happy to hear you liked the sacred suspension as much, Shereen..thank you 🙂 x

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    Chess said:
    May 9, 2014 at 12:18 am

    Gorgeous imagery, moving and thoughtful.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 12:28 am

      Thank you dear Chess, appreciate your kind words 🙂 much love

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    Elizabeth said:
    May 8, 2014 at 11:55 pm

    This photo is breath taken!

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 12:29 am

      Happy to hear you like it Elizabeth 🙂 Thank you!

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    Line said:
    May 8, 2014 at 9:14 pm

    Oh, so beautiful Himani!! It is amazing!! I just adore you poetry!! 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 12:30 am

      Thank you sweet Line, appreciate it as always ❤ Hope you're having lots of fun!

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    M. Zane McClellan said:
    May 8, 2014 at 9:02 pm

    Lovely, you had me at sandalwood, an intoxicating aroma for me, instantly evokes my strongest memory of my first love.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 9, 2014 at 12:31 am

      Thank you MIchael, happy to hear you resonated! ah that must be one fragrant tale 🙂

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        M. Zane McClellan said:
        May 9, 2014 at 12:32 am

        Indeed. Mystical, magical, and romantic tale of twin souls. My favorite. 🙂

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          Himani B responded:
          May 9, 2014 at 12:33 am

          Please share if you can 🙂 I’d love that!

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    Journey In Rhyme said:
    May 8, 2014 at 8:32 pm

    Sooo lovely! Great piece!

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:37 pm

      Thank you E ❤ appreciate it coming from you!

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    sabpalmares said:
    May 8, 2014 at 8:27 pm

    lovely! very delicate and dreamy

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:37 pm

      Thank you so much 🙂 Appreciate your kind words x

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    Writing to Freedom said:
    May 8, 2014 at 8:25 pm

    Wondeful imagery and wordplay. I’d like to float away on your beautiful dream poem. 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:36 pm

      Thank you dear Brad, appreciate it 🙂 Float away ~

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    PatriotNow said:
    May 8, 2014 at 8:22 pm

    Beautiful visual and words!

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:35 pm

      Thank you so much, happy to hear you liked it 🙂 Wishing you the very best!

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    Robert said:
    May 8, 2014 at 8:19 pm

    Dear Himani,

    Thank you for this lovely poem. This poem has left *me* in holy suspension.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:33 pm

      Thank you dear Robert, isn’t it a beautiful state? 🙂 Your comment made me smile. In surrendering fully to the Beloved, we indeed find ourselves weightless. Stay blessed, always!

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    hitandrun1964 said:
    May 8, 2014 at 8:17 pm

    Ethereal and beautiful.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:31 pm

      Thanks you Hitandrun 🙂 Appreciate your kind words as always..much love x

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