unravel
as you slowly reveal
me to myself
through every experience
may I only become
a heart that bleeds love
a soul that pours light
as you slowly reveal
me to myself
through every experience
may I only become
a heart that bleeds love
a soul that pours light
June 9, 2014 at 7:13 am
I love the idea of the match.When we light it we give it its life and then it dies. Maybe our life is the same but the time line is different.
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June 12, 2014 at 12:47 am
Very true, happy to hear you could resonate 🙂 Many thanks!
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June 7, 2014 at 12:12 pm
Passion that begets happiness.Beautiful poem.Jalal
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June 8, 2014 at 2:30 am
Many thanks Jalal, glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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June 7, 2014 at 11:54 am
I love the supplication at the end. May it come true for all of us. It touched my soul. 🙂 x
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June 8, 2014 at 2:31 am
I pray so too 🙂 Thank you Sean, happy to hear it resonated with you..much ❤
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June 7, 2014 at 7:03 am
Thank you for inspiring me here is a poem I just wrote about a matchstick http://mrmichaeldale.com/2014/06/07/solitary-matchstick-a-poem-about-living-your-life-without-judgments/
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June 7, 2014 at 7:01 am
[…] to Himani B and her exquisite poem UNRAVEL – I was inspired to write this. The thought of a solitary […]
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June 7, 2014 at 6:42 am
That’s a great photograph Himani and beautiful Sufiesque words as well. I love your work
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June 8, 2014 at 2:47 am
I am humbled to receive your kind words, dear Michael. Happy to hear this space resonates with you. All my best wishes, stay blessed 🙂
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June 8, 2014 at 2:53 am
Thanks Himani!
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June 6, 2014 at 9:49 pm
Many thanks 🙂
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June 6, 2014 at 8:50 pm
Lovely words, stunning photo.
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June 8, 2014 at 2:33 am
Thank you so much, appreciate it 🙂
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June 6, 2014 at 8:41 pm
I like “unravel” and combination of the picture of the match being unraveled as it’s life is spent shedding light!
“Man is a mystery. It needs to be unravelled, and if you spend your whole life unravelling it, don’t say that you’ve wasted time. I am studying that mystery because I want to be a human being.”
― Fyodor Dostoyevsky
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June 8, 2014 at 3:14 am
Glad you resonated, thank you so much 🙂 And thats really beautiful what you shared!! Appreciate it 🙂
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June 6, 2014 at 8:25 pm
Lovely and illuminating!
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June 8, 2014 at 2:33 am
Many thanks dearest brother, I pray all is well 🙂
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June 6, 2014 at 9:52 am
Thank You for Being a Blessing in my Life. I Appreciate YOU 🙂
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June 6, 2014 at 8:36 am
My new favorite. This poem is just gorgeous, Himani.
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June 6, 2014 at 7:24 pm
Thank you so much Audrey, glad to hear it resonated with you 🙂 ❤
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June 6, 2014 at 7:05 am
This must be the prettiest thing I’ve read for a while! Thanks!
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June 6, 2014 at 9:50 pm
Humbled to hear that ❤ Thank you so much!
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June 6, 2014 at 6:58 am
Lovelyx
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June 6, 2014 at 9:50 pm
Thank you B 🙂 x
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June 6, 2014 at 6:36 am
Dear Himani,
Thank you for this lovely poem. This is amazing.
I particularly like how you expressed what is to be revealed.
All good wishes,
robert
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June 8, 2014 at 2:36 am
Thank you dearest Robert, happy to hear it resonated with you 🙂 Blessed be.
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June 6, 2014 at 4:36 am
A very beautiful poem.
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June 8, 2014 at 2:45 am
Much appreciated, glad to hear you liked it 🙂
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June 6, 2014 at 3:11 am
Such beauty in your words. This is amazing!
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June 8, 2014 at 2:44 am
Appreciate it coming from you, thank you Phen 🙂
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June 8, 2014 at 2:52 am
Thank you 🙂 and you’re very welcome 😀
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June 6, 2014 at 1:56 am
Superb! ((Awhoooo))
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June 8, 2014 at 2:44 am
Many thanks dear Marcus!
((Awhooooooo))
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June 8, 2014 at 4:41 am
Love getting howls back
It’s wonderful when the forest is alive
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June 6, 2014 at 1:25 am
Loved it. “I met myself through you”
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June 8, 2014 at 2:43 am
Isn’t that lovely, makes me happy to hear that 🙂 Thank you for being here!
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June 6, 2014 at 1:22 am
Shedding…..did I use the right word? Oh, why am I in such a Norwegian language-mode today…I meant to let out, or to get rid off……
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June 6, 2014 at 1:19 am
This so gorgeously written, and I so agree with you dearest Himani. Only, if you should ever feel like shedding some darkness, there are lot of people to fill you up with Light again 🙂 🙂 Reveal me to myself, I love that! 🙂 Have an extraordinarily beautiful day! Lots of Love to you! 🙂
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June 8, 2014 at 2:42 am
Aww aren’t you the sweetest!! Your pure heart and soul pours through your words and I sometimes wish you were physically around so I could hug you and squish you when you say such sweet things ❤ Appreciate your kind words and presence here, beautiful Line..you brighten up my day everytime you stop by xx
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June 8, 2014 at 8:30 am
❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ 🙂
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June 6, 2014 at 12:36 am
Reblogged this on Haddyism.
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June 8, 2014 at 2:40 am
Thank you Haddy for your sweet gesture, glad it spoke to you 🙂
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June 8, 2014 at 8:44 am
You’re welcome 🙂
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June 6, 2014 at 12:17 am
This is absolutely stunning!!!…a soul that pours light, love it! Oliana
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June 8, 2014 at 2:39 am
Many thanks Oliana, appreciate your kind words ❤
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June 6, 2014 at 12:16 am
beautiful phrases that evoke love with a hint of pain (bleed love). Maybe like a rose? keep on painting these soulful poems. ❤
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June 8, 2014 at 2:39 am
You see it too well, Brad. Loving the Divine is easier than loving a human 🙂 Your kind words and feedback are much appreciated..have a beautiful Sunday!
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June 8, 2014 at 12:07 pm
Thanks Dear Himani. I’d like either version of love. XD Your blessings are appreciated and received. ❤
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