unravel

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as you slowly reveal
me to myself
through every experience
may I only become
a heart that bleeds love
a soul that pours light

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49 thoughts on “unravel

    suchled said:
    June 9, 2014 at 7:13 am

    I love the idea of the match.When we light it we give it its life and then it dies. Maybe our life is the same but the time line is different.

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      Himani B responded:
      June 12, 2014 at 12:47 am

      Very true, happy to hear you could resonate 🙂 Many thanks!

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    Passion that begets happiness.Beautiful poem.Jalal

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:30 am

      Many thanks Jalal, glad you enjoyed it 🙂

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    seanmirza said:
    June 7, 2014 at 11:54 am

    I love the supplication at the end. May it come true for all of us. It touched my soul. 🙂 x

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:31 am

      I pray so too 🙂 Thank you Sean, happy to hear it resonated with you..much ❤

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    Michael R. Dale said:
    June 7, 2014 at 7:03 am

    Thank you for inspiring me here is a poem I just wrote about a matchstick http://mrmichaeldale.com/2014/06/07/solitary-matchstick-a-poem-about-living-your-life-without-judgments/

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    […] to Himani B and her exquisite poem UNRAVEL – I was inspired to write this. The thought of a solitary […]

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    Michael R. Dale said:
    June 7, 2014 at 6:42 am

    That’s a great photograph Himani and beautiful Sufiesque words as well. I love your work

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:47 am

      I am humbled to receive your kind words, dear Michael. Happy to hear this space resonates with you. All my best wishes, stay blessed 🙂

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    Himani B responded:
    June 6, 2014 at 9:49 pm

    Many thanks 🙂

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    juromalazo said:
    June 6, 2014 at 8:50 pm

    Lovely words, stunning photo.

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:33 am

      Thank you so much, appreciate it 🙂

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    fergusandthedruid said:
    June 6, 2014 at 8:41 pm

    I like “unravel” and combination of the picture of the match being unraveled as it’s life is spent shedding light!

    “Man is a mystery. It needs to be unravelled, and if you spend your whole life unravelling it, don’t say that you’ve wasted time. I am studying that mystery because I want to be a human being.”
    ― Fyodor Dostoyevsky

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 3:14 am

      Glad you resonated, thank you so much 🙂 And thats really beautiful what you shared!! Appreciate it 🙂

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    Wendell A. Brown said:
    June 6, 2014 at 8:25 pm

    Lovely and illuminating!

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:33 am

      Many thanks dearest brother, I pray all is well 🙂

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    Morgan said:
    June 6, 2014 at 9:52 am

    Thank You for Being a Blessing in my Life. I Appreciate YOU 🙂

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    Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister said:
    June 6, 2014 at 8:36 am

    My new favorite. This poem is just gorgeous, Himani.

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      Himani B responded:
      June 6, 2014 at 7:24 pm

      Thank you so much Audrey, glad to hear it resonated with you 🙂 ❤

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    janemwoodman said:
    June 6, 2014 at 7:05 am

    This must be the prettiest thing I’ve read for a while! Thanks!

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      Himani B responded:
      June 6, 2014 at 9:50 pm

      Humbled to hear that ❤ Thank you so much!

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    b.l. ronan said:
    June 6, 2014 at 6:58 am

    Lovelyx

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    Robert said:
    June 6, 2014 at 6:36 am

    Dear Himani,

    Thank you for this lovely poem. This is amazing.

    I particularly like how you expressed what is to be revealed.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:36 am

      Thank you dearest Robert, happy to hear it resonated with you 🙂 Blessed be.

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    augustmacgregor said:
    June 6, 2014 at 4:36 am

    A very beautiful poem.

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:45 am

      Much appreciated, glad to hear you liked it 🙂

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    Phen Weston said:
    June 6, 2014 at 3:11 am

    Such beauty in your words. This is amazing!

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:44 am

      Appreciate it coming from you, thank you Phen 🙂

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        Phen Weston said:
        June 8, 2014 at 2:52 am

        Thank you 🙂 and you’re very welcome 😀

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    marcus said:
    June 6, 2014 at 1:56 am

    Superb! ((Awhoooo))

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:44 am

      Many thanks dear Marcus!

      ((Awhooooooo))

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        marcus said:
        June 8, 2014 at 4:41 am

        Love getting howls back
        It’s wonderful when the forest is alive

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    indernik said:
    June 6, 2014 at 1:25 am

    Loved it. “I met myself through you”

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:43 am

      Isn’t that lovely, makes me happy to hear that 🙂 Thank you for being here!

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    Line said:
    June 6, 2014 at 1:22 am

    Shedding…..did I use the right word? Oh, why am I in such a Norwegian language-mode today…I meant to let out, or to get rid off……

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    Line said:
    June 6, 2014 at 1:19 am

    This so gorgeously written, and I so agree with you dearest Himani. Only, if you should ever feel like shedding some darkness, there are lot of people to fill you up with Light again 🙂 🙂 Reveal me to myself, I love that! 🙂 Have an extraordinarily beautiful day! Lots of Love to you! 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:42 am

      Aww aren’t you the sweetest!! Your pure heart and soul pours through your words and I sometimes wish you were physically around so I could hug you and squish you when you say such sweet things ❤ Appreciate your kind words and presence here, beautiful Line..you brighten up my day everytime you stop by xx

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        Line said:
        June 8, 2014 at 8:30 am

        ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ 🙂

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    haddyism said:
    June 6, 2014 at 12:36 am

    Reblogged this on Haddyism.

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:40 am

      Thank you Haddy for your sweet gesture, glad it spoke to you 🙂

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        haddyism said:
        June 8, 2014 at 8:44 am

        You’re welcome 🙂

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    Tracesofthesoul said:
    June 6, 2014 at 12:17 am

    This is absolutely stunning!!!…a soul that pours light, love it! Oliana

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:39 am

      Many thanks Oliana, appreciate your kind words ❤

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    Writing to Freedom said:
    June 6, 2014 at 12:16 am

    beautiful phrases that evoke love with a hint of pain (bleed love). Maybe like a rose? keep on painting these soulful poems. ❤

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      Himani B responded:
      June 8, 2014 at 2:39 am

      You see it too well, Brad. Loving the Divine is easier than loving a human 🙂 Your kind words and feedback are much appreciated..have a beautiful Sunday!

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        Writing to Freedom said:
        June 8, 2014 at 12:07 pm

        Thanks Dear Himani. I’d like either version of love. 😄 Your blessings are appreciated and received. ❤

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