caress

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with such care
you unfold my petals
disrobing my essence
you leave me
desirously entangled
in your purest daring

your subtle love play
finds me caving
in your soft yielding touch

bodies entwined
floating in time
I delight
in your clinging

…..

music by Auditive Escape

25 thoughts on “caress

    Martian said:
    April 26, 2016 at 9:49 am

    That’s so delicious

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    composehers said:
    August 17, 2015 at 1:33 pm

    gingerly erotic.

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    Melinda de los Santos said:
    May 16, 2015 at 1:45 am

    The Song of Himani. (You make me think of Rumi.) 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 16, 2015 at 11:09 am

      Ah you’re wayyy too kind Melinda, thank you! Rumi is my lighthouse, so I’m humbled ❤

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    AB said:
    May 6, 2015 at 4:32 am

    the solitary pink rose petal
    touching, floating
    on keratinous filaments
    back of that neck
    kissing slight
    just what feels right
    raising crazing an emotion
    so deep, humanity evolved
    out of sleep, passion creep
    mind receiving million
    billion, uncountable
    sensory tingles, all crying
    wying for that turn
    of the head, and deep
    dark, intoxicated eyes
    feeling, kneeling to
    lust of living, giving
    pleasure, pain, insane
    elation, dilation
    of whites to turn pink
    rose petal link, mink
    soft sink, feel the paradise

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    Paritosh said:
    April 29, 2015 at 2:42 pm

    Very evocative…! Thank you!

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    b.l. ronan said:
    April 29, 2015 at 6:53 am

    I’m ever in awe at the grace of your pen x

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    johnallenrichter said:
    April 28, 2015 at 8:07 pm

    oww… I can’t even speel right now. Tey that again: wow! wooo. I’m going to tell you a little secret about men. It’s not the actual act that wins the brass ring. It’s the caving. It’s the submitting. It’s the look in the eye that says “I’m yours, take me…” It’s the subtle little “aaah” when our fingers touch you the first time. That’s the climax, that’s the ticket to a man’s heart…. You so just hit all over it with this poem!

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      Himani B responded:
      April 29, 2015 at 12:51 am

      Thank you for visiting and for sharing that, John.. I’m happy to hear you enjoyed the words. I’ve always seen sensuality and seduction as an art form, will definitely remember that 🙂

      Much love and light

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    SGC Admin said:
    April 28, 2015 at 1:41 pm

    that was lovely… 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      April 29, 2015 at 12:52 am

      Glad you thought so, thank you 🙂

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    Zubdat said:
    April 28, 2015 at 12:28 pm

    Lovely ,soft feelings that cling

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      Himani B responded:
      April 29, 2015 at 12:52 am

      🙂 Thank you Zubdat, happy to hear you liked it! ❤

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    b.l. ronan said:
    April 28, 2015 at 11:23 am

    oh this is glorious. xxx

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    macjam47 said:
    April 28, 2015 at 10:17 am

    Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

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    Writing to Freedom said:
    April 28, 2015 at 8:42 am

    sensuous beauty wrapped in love. Yum!

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    noellevignola said:
    April 28, 2015 at 7:14 am

    really beautiful

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    Robert said:
    April 28, 2015 at 5:18 am

    Dear Himani,

    Thank you for this very lovely poem. We read it, and get lost in the unfolding, the disrobing. Like the words of Khwaja Hafez, these words point to both sensual and super-sensual realities.

    This is so very nice, made even more so by the ambient music which we are enjoying.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      April 29, 2015 at 12:43 am

      Thank you so much Robert :)) I delight in reading how you bring the sensual and the spiritual meanings together. I must confess though that every time my post has a more sensual inclination, I do get a lil nervous knowing that you are definitely going to read it 🙂 Maybe its because out of love and gratitude for you being more of a spiritual companion, I hold you in high regard. And for as long as I’ve been aware, my very essence has felt a strong pull towards the spiritual and sensual realms with equal intensity and hence the reflections in the words that flow through. Both are so integrated in my being that I had to embrace them to be true to myself. But as always, you make connections between the two for me that sometimes escape my conscious awareness 🙂 So thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for your presence and words 🙂 Here’s a piece of music for you, that you might enjoy 🙂

      Love and regard, as always!

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        Robert said:
        April 29, 2015 at 7:41 pm

        Dear Himani,

        What a nice reply :).As I’m writing this, I’m listening to the music you’ve shared. Wow…how I like it!

        *I* delight in how you bring the sensual and spiritual together! Your poetry brings alive the same feeling for me as some of the old Sufi and Hindu poets whose writings bring alive the depths of the heart, while also, at the same time, pointing, hinting, looking at, very sensual imagery. I think there’s a reason the spiritual and sensual can connect, as love flows in both. Direct experience of a subtle kind can sometimes only find expression in sensual language, for that is almost how one may sense a connection to the divine.

        In fact, the dry descriptions of the cleric do not interest me. They are speaking book-knowledge, and not the knowledge of taste.

        Your poetry is wonderful!

        All good wishes,

        robert

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    Richard Ankers said:
    April 28, 2015 at 2:04 am

    Velvet words wrapped in silk.

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    aiman peer said:
    April 28, 2015 at 1:56 am

    a sensual lounge with a fantastic poem…. like always, great work..

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    Alan McDonald said:
    April 27, 2015 at 11:59 pm

    Soft, sincere and romantic! Great soundtrack!

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