Thank you Rexie! The post I shared it in, I shared with what are probably even more beautiful lines by some other writers, and a couple musicians, that when read along with my poem, give my poem a more beautiful context that it may seem to have when it stands alone.
This is the post I posted it in, if you are curious and wanting to read the other writer’s more beautiful words (my real objective opinion, though I may seem to smell of repugnant false humility. lol My poem is only one facet of the whole of what I believe was a collectively beautiful post… I didn’t even post my own poem at the beginning of it as I sometimes do. most of my posts that have my own writings in them, I pair with words by others that I admire who inspire me creatively!) – http://21shadesofblue.com/2014/01/03/shadorma-will-o-the-wisps-shadow-tears-chase-banshee-whos-moved-away-combinatorial-creativity/
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January 6, 2014 at 7:56 am
Amazing way you’ve with words.
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January 15, 2014 at 10:24 am
ah you’re too kind, thank you so much ♥
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January 4, 2014 at 9:15 pm
amazing…there is romance in your words….love it 🙂
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January 15, 2014 at 10:24 am
thank you dear Apurva, and I love it when I see you here in this space 🙂
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January 3, 2014 at 8:26 pm
I like your “what shadows cannot touch”.
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January 15, 2014 at 10:32 am
thank you 🙂
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January 3, 2014 at 8:08 pm
Reblogged this on Keptmeprisoner and commented:
i’m loving shadows…
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January 3, 2014 at 2:01 pm
I second on you that Ihsan! Totally. We must have a love button on this blog for sure 🙂
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January 15, 2014 at 10:33 am
haha thank you!! you guys are too sweet. appreciate it 🙂
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January 3, 2014 at 12:36 pm
Ah, reminds me of a Shadorma poem I wrote today I’ll share below. I like your poem!
“Shadorma — Will-’o-the-Wisp’s Shadow Tears Chase Banshee Who’s Moved Away”
by Ry Hakari
Willow beau,
up early, mourning
Fleeting love’s
shadow chase —
Rays of light cast tears across
everlong distance…………………………………
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January 3, 2014 at 2:02 pm
Ah, what beautiful lines!
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January 3, 2014 at 2:52 pm
Thank you Rexie! The post I shared it in, I shared with what are probably even more beautiful lines by some other writers, and a couple musicians, that when read along with my poem, give my poem a more beautiful context that it may seem to have when it stands alone.
This is the post I posted it in, if you are curious and wanting to read the other writer’s more beautiful words (my real objective opinion, though I may seem to smell of repugnant false humility. lol My poem is only one facet of the whole of what I believe was a collectively beautiful post… I didn’t even post my own poem at the beginning of it as I sometimes do. most of my posts that have my own writings in them, I pair with words by others that I admire who inspire me creatively!) – http://21shadesofblue.com/2014/01/03/shadorma-will-o-the-wisps-shadow-tears-chase-banshee-whos-moved-away-combinatorial-creativity/
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January 3, 2014 at 11:40 am
The mark of excellent poetry/prose is to pack as much meaning into a few words as possible. That’s what you excel at.
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January 15, 2014 at 10:34 am
and you’re too kind Daniel, thank you so much! 🙂
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January 3, 2014 at 10:43 am
Greetings,
Beautiful!
Thank you for this about what shadows cannot touch.
All good wishes,
robert
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January 15, 2014 at 10:36 am
thanks a lot Robert 🙂 your kind words and persistent feedback means a lot to me!
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January 3, 2014 at 10:09 am
My heart melts!
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January 15, 2014 at 10:34 am
nooraaa ♥ thank you!!
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January 3, 2014 at 9:59 am
Wow…very simple but stunning!
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January 15, 2014 at 10:35 am
thanks a lot, appreciate that 🙂
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