seraphic flow

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pour yourself
in me
till I am brimming
with you

flood in
a little more
till I overflow
with what a lifetime
can’t contain

as you slowly
trickle down my being
keep flowing in
till all I can feel
is you

when less
has been spoken
more has been heard,
take two steps closer
and revive me
with your touch

without a sound
awaken me
with your whisper
and remind me
what I have forgotten
remind me of you

with a paint brush then
consume me
in your painting
till I am one
with your colours
guiding me
with brushstrokes
take me home

pour
your
soul
into mine

overwhelm me

…..
art by Pery Burge : http://www.chronoscapes.com h

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120 thoughts on “seraphic flow

    this is so beautiful…I love the poem…and I love the painting!

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    Samra said:
    October 4, 2014 at 11:48 am

    Great 🙂

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    mariam.rehman said:
    October 4, 2014 at 9:37 am

    Beautiful imagery Himani!

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    @Rohwit said:
    October 4, 2014 at 5:17 am

    Such a complete expression! Beautiful!

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    specialistneeds said:
    July 21, 2014 at 11:53 pm

    Well this was very sensual! May need a cold shower after reading this.

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      Himani B responded:
      July 22, 2014 at 5:57 pm

      haha I’ll take that as a compliment! Glad you liked it, thank you 🙂 ❤

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    Judy said:
    June 19, 2014 at 2:31 pm

    This is wonderful!!

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      Himani B responded:
      June 19, 2014 at 8:22 pm

      Thank you so much Judy, glad you liked it 🙂

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    themysticdom said:
    April 4, 2014 at 7:21 am

    This was so gorgeous !!! As pure as making true love !

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      Himani B responded:
      April 12, 2014 at 12:32 pm

      Thank you so much for your kind words! Sorry I’m not sure how I missed your comment but I appreciate you here 🙂 much love

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    poet2e said:
    March 28, 2014 at 12:54 pm

    tapped in right place and at right time with right words,,

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      Himani B responded:
      March 29, 2014 at 3:10 am

      very happy to hear that 🙂 many thanks and much love!

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        poet2e said:
        March 29, 2014 at 3:29 am

        😛

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    Writing to Freedom said:
    February 13, 2014 at 12:29 am

    Wow, what beautiful, sensual and divine word play. You inspire me to allow my muse more room to soar. Thanks! Brad

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:58 pm

      thank you so much Brad 😊 appreciate your visit. great to hear you enjoyed this! with tinge of creativity and grace, sky is just the beginning..I wish you the very best 😊

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    Laurie Merritt Photography said:
    February 7, 2014 at 9:15 am

    I may have missed this somewhere, but have you thought about publishing a book, Himani? Just saying….

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:56 pm

      thank you Laurie..sweet of you to ask 😊 yes, one day with the grace of Divine..its always been a dream! much love!

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    Vashi Chandi said:
    February 4, 2014 at 3:04 am

    Enamored in oneness, God Bless

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:54 pm

      yess..thank you Vashi..appreciate all of your kind comments 😊

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    artmusedog said:
    January 18, 2014 at 6:58 pm

    Beautiful ~ good to meet another ‘seeker’ ~ carol

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:54 pm

      yes, a pleasure to meet you Carol! 😊 wishing you the very best on your journey! much love!

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    psychologistmimi said:
    January 17, 2014 at 7:53 pm

    Beautiful pieces (including the art)!

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      Himani B responded:
      February 13, 2014 at 5:53 pm

      thank you so much mimi, appreciate it 😊

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    divinelymeg said:
    January 15, 2014 at 6:16 pm

    Beautiful!

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      Himani B responded:
      January 17, 2014 at 1:58 pm

      thanks a lot divinelymeg 🙂

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    chrisnelson61 said:
    January 15, 2014 at 9:58 am

    Beautifully emotive piece of writing!

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      Himani B responded:
      January 17, 2014 at 1:58 pm

      thank you so much Chris, appreciate that 🙂

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    patrickcollier said:
    January 2, 2014 at 8:46 pm

    Fantastic piece!!

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      Himani B responded:
      January 6, 2014 at 1:07 pm

      thanks a lot Patrick 🙂

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    Apurva said:
    December 28, 2013 at 5:07 am

    came back to this one after giving it a glance few days ago….have to say gives me goosebumps even now 🙂 great work…goes very well with the image

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      Himani B responded:
      December 28, 2013 at 12:35 pm

      thank you so much Apurva, you’re sweet! makes me happy to hear that 🙂 ♥

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        Apurva said:
        December 29, 2013 at 5:15 am

        you’re welcome 🙂

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        Apurva said:
        December 29, 2013 at 5:15 am

        you’re welcome 🙂

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    Noora said:
    December 26, 2013 at 11:13 am

    I always read poetry aloud to understand, appreciate and FEEL it better, and this masterpiece flows so smoothly. I had chills running down my spine. Fantastic work, Himani.

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      Himani B responded:
      December 28, 2013 at 1:07 pm

      Nooraaa ♥ thank you, thank youu! appreciate that coming from you!

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    utalap said:
    December 25, 2013 at 10:27 am

    The first stanza drew me in, and then the second stanza captured me entirely. Love this piece.

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      Himani B responded:
      December 25, 2013 at 10:30 am

      thank you so much utalap, happy to hear that ♥

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    searchingforsubstance said:
    December 23, 2013 at 7:02 pm

    alluring…thanks for writing and sharing this.

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    jennifersivec said:
    December 21, 2013 at 10:52 am

    Reblogged this on jennifersivec and commented:
    Beautiful ❤️

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      Himani B responded:
      December 22, 2013 at 9:57 am

      thanks a lot Jennifer 🙂 ❤️

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    mrmodigliani said:
    December 21, 2013 at 8:55 am

    I really have no ideaa how you showed up in my reader, but this is beautiful, fits me perfectly and I am now following

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      Himani B responded:
      December 22, 2013 at 9:57 am

      haha thanks a lot..glad to see you landed here..appreciate that 🙂

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    lambskinny said:
    December 21, 2013 at 7:44 am

    Reblogged this on Versatile Blogger Award and commented:
    Nice poem!

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      Himani B responded:
      December 22, 2013 at 9:56 am

      thank you so much 🙂

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    syntaxsinner said:
    December 21, 2013 at 4:12 am

    Consume me is a great need thx4L |§|

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      Himani B responded:
      December 22, 2013 at 9:56 am

      yes..a need and an ecstasy, thank you 🙂

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    Mike said:
    December 21, 2013 at 1:21 am

    This piece overflows with beautifully sensitive metaphor and imagery. Very well executed.

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      Himani B responded:
      December 22, 2013 at 9:55 am

      thank you so much Mike, glad to hear you liked it 🙂

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    mcfcwolf said:
    December 20, 2013 at 5:27 pm

    This is way better than anything I could write. Stunning brilliance

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:54 pm

      no way 🙂 its love and a touch of madness..but you know that. many thanks for your kind words, mcfcwolf 🙂

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    thdem said:
    December 20, 2013 at 2:37 pm

    Incredible impressive.

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:50 pm

      you’re too kind, thank you thdem 🙂

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    Adrian Mitchell said:
    December 20, 2013 at 1:05 pm

    Very good. Very good indeed

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:49 pm

      thanks a lot Adrian, appreciate that 🙂

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    Lala Rukh said:
    December 20, 2013 at 11:14 am

    WOW…….I don’t have words for this….I can just show my expressions which are like WOW…..BEAUTIFUL Himani !

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:49 pm

      Lalaaaaa! thank you sweetheart, you’re too generous! appreciate your kind words as always 🙂

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    aiofflight said:
    December 19, 2013 at 11:10 pm

    ah, no wonder. kahlil gibran & rumi are two of my favorite poets of all time. wonderful work =)

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:47 pm

      🙂 thank you so much aiofflight!

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    moodymandi said:
    December 19, 2013 at 9:17 pm

    You are genius-prodigy. I very much admire your unique gift and talent! Keep it up!

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:46 pm

      my humble heart bows in gratitude to your kind words..thank you so much again!

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    earthmuther said:
    December 19, 2013 at 8:24 pm

    Fluidly brilliant

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:45 pm

      many thanks earthmuther, appreciate that 🙂

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    Nobody Special said:
    December 19, 2013 at 11:19 am

    So very yummy!

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    hitandrun1964 said:
    December 19, 2013 at 10:35 am

    Wonderful.

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:44 pm

      thank you hitandrun 🙂

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    Michael Graeme said:
    December 19, 2013 at 9:32 am

    Stunning piece. Like peacefulblessedstar, I felt goosebumps reading it.

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:41 pm

      you’re too kind Michael, thank you. its always great to hear that the words evoked something. thank you for dropping by 🙂

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    Robert said:
    December 19, 2013 at 8:09 am

    Greetings,

    This is a beautiful poem implying filling up with the Friend to a degree that all else fades. Beautiful.

    Very nice art which accompanies it.

    Thank you for this.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:40 pm

      ah yes..I guess unconsciously I was referring to oneness. thank you Robert, great to hear from you as always..appreciate your kind words! all my best wishes

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    omtatjuan said:
    December 19, 2013 at 7:56 am

    Wonderful as usual!!!

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:37 pm

      many thanks omtatjuan, as always appreciate your feedback 🙂

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    Oloriel said:
    December 19, 2013 at 4:23 am

    Beautiful and heartfelt, I loved it!

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:37 pm

      very happy to hear that Oloriel, thank you 🙂

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    Zeeshan said:
    December 19, 2013 at 4:02 am

    I am sitting here simply awestruck by the exquisiteness of this poem. One of my favourites.

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:36 pm

      thank you so much Zeeshan! means a lot coming from a brilliant poet as you..appreciate that 🙂

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    corffhardd said:
    December 19, 2013 at 3:01 am

    This is absolutely gorgeous to read and absorb. Love it

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:34 pm

      you’re too sweet Jenn, thank you so much!

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    Wendell A. Brown said:
    December 19, 2013 at 2:48 am

    P.S., the image is awesome also!!!!

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    Wendell A. Brown said:
    December 19, 2013 at 2:47 am

    Such beautiful words capture the genuine feelings of a tender heart in love! Your words will make one’s heart beat faster and sweeps one’s heart away! Awesome poem my sister, this Is a gem that shows your poetic genius! Hugs and blessings always

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:33 pm

      sweet brother, many thanks for your kind words. I think you got me this time! haha the poem that you shared the other day from 1976 has stayed with me..it often comes to my thoughts. and appreciate your love and wishes, as always..hope you’re enjoying this holiday season 🙂

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    Rob Taylor said:
    December 19, 2013 at 12:55 am

    Tempting…..

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:30 pm

      🙂 thank you Rob!

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    moodymandi said:
    December 19, 2013 at 12:38 am

    three letters: O M G.

    You are absolutely brilliant!!! You also inspire me! *Blessings*

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:29 pm

      ah you’re too kind, moodymandi! appreciate that..thank you so much! be blessed 🙂

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    edgarone2 said:
    December 19, 2013 at 12:11 am

    Lovely.

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    abozdar said:
    December 18, 2013 at 11:53 pm

    Amazing 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:27 pm

      thanks a lot abozdar 🙂

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        abozdar said:
        December 21, 2013 at 12:53 am

        You are most welcome, you put your heart out there, the least we can do is praise at its immense beauty 🙂

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    Rexie said:
    December 18, 2013 at 11:38 pm

    Superb, my love! 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:27 pm

      thank you so much Rex! ♥

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    peacefulblessedstar said:
    December 18, 2013 at 10:15 pm

    I got goose bumps….:-D

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:25 pm

      😀 did you? thats great to hear, thank you so much!

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    Daniel Ionson said:
    December 18, 2013 at 10:11 pm

    Exquisite, Himani.

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      Himani B responded:
      December 20, 2013 at 10:24 pm

      thanks a lot Daniel 🙂

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        Daniel Ionson said:
        December 20, 2013 at 10:25 pm

        Makes me miss writing pure prose… I get so engrossed in novel-writing that I don’t.

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