bowed

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I am here
at your threshold
empty

fill me up
with you

h

28 thoughts on “bowed

    moneebz said:
    December 19, 2014 at 6:37 pm

    I’ll take this as a reminder 🙂 “I’m a here”… to be here, you need to be there and ask.

    Nice mA

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    seanmirza said:
    July 22, 2014 at 11:28 am

    Great supplication. So profound. Thank you for sharing. 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      July 24, 2014 at 12:00 pm

      Pleasure to share with readers like you who can resonate 🙂 Humbled, thank you 🙂

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    Sarbjit Singh Khaira said:
    July 21, 2014 at 9:50 pm

    A beauty !!

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    Writing to Freedom said:
    July 21, 2014 at 9:56 am

    How beautiful Himani, Thanks for sharing your tender heart with us. Fill me up! XD

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      Himani B responded:
      July 21, 2014 at 7:24 pm

      Thank you Brad, it always delights me hear that you enjoyed my humble words 🙂

      Much love

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    drapersmeadow4 said:
    July 21, 2014 at 8:57 am

    Basic and complex. Stunning. All the best. ~Karen~

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      Himani B responded:
      July 21, 2014 at 7:25 pm

      Thank you beautiful Karen, glad you enjoyed it 🙂 ❤

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    Robert said:
    July 21, 2014 at 7:57 am

    Dear Himani,

    How very lovely, instructive, and inspiring is this poem, for how can we come to another, full of our selves.

    Thank you very much for this.

    The art is wonderful. It reminds me of the mountains here, and the mist and clouds which move through them.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      July 21, 2014 at 7:27 pm

      Ahh you’re so lucky to live near the mountains, Robert! 🙂 And you’re right, we can only give what we carry in our self..more of a consequence than an act. Your presence is much appreciated, thank you for always being there 🙂 Much love and all my good wishes!

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    redgladiola said:
    July 21, 2014 at 7:08 am

    Lovely!

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      Himani B responded:
      July 21, 2014 at 7:27 pm

      Thank you dear one! ❤

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    iconoclast and cynic said:
    July 21, 2014 at 6:18 am

    Brilliant and succinct prose!

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      Himani B responded:
      July 21, 2014 at 7:28 pm

      Many thanks 🙂 Happy to hear you feel so.

      All my good wishes

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    specialistneeds said:
    July 21, 2014 at 12:35 am

    Deeply sensual and yet so slightly sexual.

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      Himani B responded:
      July 21, 2014 at 7:35 pm

      haha you’re the second person to say that! Although I have to admit, when I concieved this, I had nothing even remotely sexual in mind. But thank you, as long as you liked it 🙂

      Oh and you might like : https://tenderheartmusings.wordpress.com/2013/12/18/seraphic-flow/

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        specialistneeds said:
        July 21, 2014 at 11:52 pm

        Not just me having a perverted mind then 😛

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          Himani B responded:
          July 22, 2014 at 5:56 pm

          Nah its just you 😉

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            specialistneeds said:
            July 22, 2014 at 5:56 pm

            Lol 😛

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    IdealisticRebel said:
    July 20, 2014 at 11:31 pm

    Reblogged this on idealisticrebel.

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      Himani B responded:
      July 21, 2014 at 7:28 pm

      Thank you so much for your kind gesture ❤

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        IdealisticRebel said:
        July 21, 2014 at 8:02 pm

        Your welcome. I hope more people stopped by to check you out. Hugs, Barbara

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    indernik said:
    July 20, 2014 at 10:55 pm

    Fill me up with you. Words like these can only come from a beautiful soul.

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      Himani B responded:
      July 21, 2014 at 7:29 pm

      You’re too kind, Inder..thank you. The only knowing I have is that I am nothing 🙂

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        indernik said:
        July 22, 2014 at 4:13 am

        And how did you reach the conclusion that “You are nothing”?

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    Cnawan Fahey said:
    July 20, 2014 at 10:48 pm

    Sublime

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      Himani B responded:
      July 21, 2014 at 7:30 pm

      Thank you Cnawan, happy to hear you resonated with the words 🙂

      Wishing you much love and the very best

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