eternal

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as
I relish
on the taste
of the infinite
I can’t tell apart
where
I end
and
you begin

h

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42 thoughts on “eternal

    sherinsk said:
    June 9, 2014 at 12:06 pm

    This was stunning.you are so talented in poetry.try other things in poems also like god,beaches,rain etc.god bless 🙂

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    Follow Your Shadow said:
    June 5, 2014 at 2:15 pm

    beautifully described…lucky are those lose themselves in each other as well as in eternity.

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    Hanne T. Fisker said:
    June 5, 2014 at 3:54 am

    exactement! 🙂

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    alexraphael said:
    June 3, 2014 at 2:05 pm

    Lovely picture to a lovely photo 🙂

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    seanmirza said:
    June 2, 2014 at 7:11 am

    Himani,
    Once again your words have managed to echo the thoughts of an aching soul cherishing it’s connection with the beloved. Simple divine. Love it.

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      Himani B responded:
      June 2, 2014 at 11:19 am

      I knew you’d like this if you read it 🙂 Thank you so much Sean, appreciate your kind feedback always! Stay blessed x

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    Daniel Ionson said:
    May 31, 2014 at 9:55 pm

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      Himani B responded:
      May 31, 2014 at 9:57 pm

      Daniel! Thank you 🙂 Its been a while since I’ve seen you around, my friend..I hope and pray things are well?

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        Daniel Ionson said:
        May 31, 2014 at 9:59 pm

        Hiya. Yeah, I’ve been working hard on getting my novel published (on paper this time). Finally all done! Will make an announcement in a couple of days.

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          Himani B responded:
          May 31, 2014 at 10:00 pm

          Thats wonderful! I am really happy for you. Definitely let me know..will look forward 🙂 Wishing you a lovely weekend!

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    lumar1298 said:
    May 31, 2014 at 5:09 pm

    Beautiful words…

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      Himani B responded:
      May 31, 2014 at 9:51 pm

      Thank you Lor, appreciate it 🙂 xx

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    Michael said:
    May 31, 2014 at 10:35 am

    The turning of the birds, echoed in the clouds beyond, that is carried by the image is glorious. You have found a most delightful pairing of words and image! They stand like a doorway.

    Michael

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      Himani B responded:
      May 31, 2014 at 9:53 pm

      Michael, what an astounding observation! I have to admit, I subconsciously picked this image but when I saw through your eyes..it totally makes sense..thank you 🙂 Appreciate you here and your valuable feedback.

      My best wishes and much love!

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    macjam47 said:
    May 31, 2014 at 6:49 am

    Lovely

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      Himani B responded:
      May 31, 2014 at 9:54 pm

      Thank you Michelle, I pray you’re doing well and enjoying a lovely evening 🙂

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    David Kanigan said:
    May 31, 2014 at 4:28 am

    Wonderful…

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      Himani B responded:
      May 31, 2014 at 9:54 pm

      Many thanks David 🙂 Much love!

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    simonfalk28 said:
    May 31, 2014 at 1:24 am

    Welcome back, Himani! Lovely combo of words and image in unison. A relish for us readers. 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 31, 2014 at 9:56 pm

      It warms my heart to know that dear Simon. Thank you so much. I treasure readers like you. And happy to hear that you liked my humbled words. I pray all is well 🙂

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    Leyla said:
    May 30, 2014 at 11:51 pm

    lovely ❤

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      Himani B responded:
      May 31, 2014 at 9:57 pm

      Many thanks dear Leyla 🙂 ❤

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    AB said:
    May 30, 2014 at 11:39 pm

    Inseparable
    Mere extension
    Shadow’s tip
    Smile’s expansion
    Moment’s blip
    You are ebb
    I am flow
    fellowship bond
    strengthens, grows
    No beginnings
    No end
    You for me
    I for you
    Heaven send
    🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 31, 2014 at 9:59 pm

      This was written in haste? nahh I dont believe that 🙂 So beautiful AB! Absolutely loved it! I should make a separate section of your poetry here..can’t afford to lose it in the comments! I hope and pray you’re enjoying a lovely weekend 🙂

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        AB said:
        June 1, 2014 at 12:11 am

        HB, indeed I am having a great weekend, it is really generous of you to say such beautiful words for my humble offerings, your poems really are amazing I merely respond to your thoughts. You have a wonderful weekend too. Kindest regards, AB

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    Pierre said:
    May 30, 2014 at 11:33 pm

    Drunk on the kiss that annihilates them, ever open to the divine that flings their unified being ever deeper and higher into the clarity of dawn.

    Missed reading your words…

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      Himani B responded:
      May 31, 2014 at 10:02 pm

      Many thanks for sharing those beautiful words, Pierre 🙂 Humbled to hear that my words were missed. Thank you for being here xx

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    Line said:
    May 30, 2014 at 10:46 pm

    Oh, this is so very very gorgeous!! 🙂 And I am so happy to be reading your poetry again!!! 🙂 Thank you for posting this!! 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 31, 2014 at 10:05 pm

      Line!!!! How are you my beautiful friend? How are the adventures treating you? 🙂 Thank you so much! Your presence has a butterfly essence to it..magical and graceful, always! I pray you’re doing well and taking lots of pictures. I havent been around WordPress much lately but I’ll look forward to catching up with your wonderful posts 🙂 Much love!

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    Robert said:
    May 30, 2014 at 8:45 pm

    Dear Himani,

    Oh, this is so very beautiful, depicting, as it does, the blurry edges between self and other.

    The accompanying art is wonderful.

    Thank you for this!

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      May 30, 2014 at 10:03 pm

      Thank you dear Robert 🙂 I pray you’re doing well and enjoying warm summer days! Truly appreciate your wishes, support and you here. Sending my best wishes, stay blessed 🙂

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    Writing to Freedom said:
    May 30, 2014 at 8:44 pm

    eternal bliss 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 30, 2014 at 10:04 pm

      Indeed Brad 😉 Thank you for being here, I hope and pray you’re doing well!

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    forgottenmeadows said:
    May 30, 2014 at 8:42 pm

    Lovely, Himani!

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    andy1076 said:
    May 30, 2014 at 8:24 pm

    We often wonder this, don’t we? words so deep to heart 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 30, 2014 at 10:05 pm

      Many thanks Andy, happy to see you dropped by 🙂 My best wishes!

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        andy1076 said:
        May 30, 2014 at 10:08 pm

        You’re most welcome and thank you again for following me 🙂 have a great weekend ahead!

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    celebratingsunshine24 said:
    May 30, 2014 at 8:03 pm

    Beautiful…

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      Himani B responded:
      May 30, 2014 at 10:05 pm

      Thank you 🙂 Much love!

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