fuchsia

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excuse me
as I reclaim
my love sonnets
tangled in your soft lips

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30 thoughts on “fuchsia

    Tamara Starr-Marie Natividad said:
    July 5, 2014 at 5:32 am

    Beautiful expression 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      July 5, 2014 at 7:34 pm

      Many thanks Tamara! Glad you like it 🙂

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    Tayyeba said:
    May 15, 2014 at 5:08 am

    BEAUTIFUL! *_*

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    Paritosh said:
    May 7, 2014 at 7:00 am

    A woozy kind of warmth engulfed me as i read this particular poem… 🙂 The world just seemed red for a moment. I’m finding myself looking forward to your poems…. 🙂 Thank you.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:17 pm

      Glad to hear that, Paritosh 🙂 Thank you so much! My warmest wishes.

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    dwmetz said:
    May 6, 2014 at 8:05 am

    concise and perfect

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:18 pm

      Thank you so much, happy to hear you liked it 🙂

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    Line said:
    May 6, 2014 at 6:41 am

    Amazingly beautiful!! 🙂 I just adore this poem! 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:18 pm

      Thank you Line 🙂 and I just adore you! x

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    f8nsidius said:
    May 5, 2014 at 11:55 pm

    Short, but powerful… Like the strongest of medicines come in small bottles 😉

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:21 pm

      haha I really like that! Many thanks 🙂 All my best wishes.

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    shadesofpoetry said:
    May 5, 2014 at 11:23 pm

    I am enjoying your pieces as well
    Heartfelt and uncomplicated
    Thank you for the follow, much appreciated!
    GOD Bless

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:21 pm

      Your kind words mean a lot to me, thank you so much! 🙂 May God bless you too and keep you close x

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    lumar1298 said:
    May 5, 2014 at 11:22 am

    Lovely…

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:22 pm

      Thank you Lor 🙂 Have a beautiful one!

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    kanzensakura said:
    May 5, 2014 at 10:12 am

    short, simple and beautifully extravagant in its depth.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:24 pm

      Thank you so much Kanzen, appreciate your kind words! Sending my best wishes

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    Writing to Freedom said:
    May 5, 2014 at 9:38 am

    wonderful imagery Himani. Makes we wish I had some lips to untangle! 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:24 pm

      haha oh Brad ❤ thank you so much! my best wishes, always 🙂

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    Robert said:
    May 5, 2014 at 7:16 am

    Dear Himani,

    Thank you for this lovely poem. How beautifully this speaks to a love which we tease into, and out of, our beloved. Lovely!

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:26 pm

      Thank you so much dearest Robert, happy to hear you liked it. I hope you’re enjoying a lovely evening 🙂 All my best wishes!

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    heavenhappens said:
    May 5, 2014 at 7:05 am

    I love that you are reclaiming your kisses so you get twice as many!
    Beautiful poetry as always x

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:27 pm

      haha thank you so much 🙂 Your sweet comment made me smile, stay blessed always xx

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    Nazish said:
    May 5, 2014 at 4:28 am

    Passionate 😛 I like that…. ❤

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:28 pm

      Thank you Nazish 🙂 Passion keeps the flame warm ❤ much love

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    Apurva said:
    May 5, 2014 at 1:24 am

    brilliant imagery! loved it 🙂 well done Himani

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:29 pm

      Thank you sweet Apurva ❤ much appreciated!

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    6hellogoodbye9 said:
    May 5, 2014 at 1:23 am

    “Tangled in your soft lips”
    Just makes me think of the kind of dazed passionate kissing that comes with the fervour of love. I love how four lines can say so very much! Thanks for the smile 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 8, 2014 at 8:29 pm

      Thank you for your lovely comment that made *me* smile 🙂 Appreciate your kind words and feedback, as always! much love

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