Posted on May 4, 2014 Updated on October 6, 2016
on our lips
as we lie together
sipping warm sunshine
This entry was posted in art, poetry and tagged beauty, Beloved, divine, free verse, gratitude, light, love, lover, melt, micropoetry, moment, poem, poetry, presence, soul, summer, sunshine, touch, warmth.
Splendid as always Himani! Just in case you miss it, I just posted something special dedicated to my favourite people and you are one of them. Please read it when you can and I hope you like it! Can’t wait to hear what you think! 🙂
sipping warm sunshine…beautiful 🙂
Well I always did think if I could ever consume love, it would be a golden elixir. Like sunshine. Nicely done, Himani!
This reader feels an absorbing, even tactile transference – nicely done poet.
Makes me happy to hear that, Mike! Your kind words mean a lot..thank you 🙂 Much love.
Thank you for this post about sipping warm sunshine. I am reading this, as I just arrived on a beach in South Carolina. And how better than to sip it than together with a beloved. The art is lovely.,
All good wishes,
How lovely Robert 🙂 I wish I lived close to a beach! There’d be twice as much poetry flowing! haha Happy to hear you liked the words. The presence of Love, no matter which form refreshes the soul. My best wishes, always..have a beautiful one 🙂
Wonderful poem. I especially like the opening, beautiful.
Thank you so much Michael, appreciate that! Have a blessed one 🙂
And that was beautiful.
Thank you Charly, happy to hear you enjoyed it 🙂 All my best wishes!
fav line ‘sipping warm sunshine’
Happy to hear you liked it, thank you 🙂
A delicate breeze
Thank you b, sending you much love on the same breeze! x
The most aromatic wine to melt through the layers of being…
Even your comment is so beautifully poetic, Pierre 🙂 Appreciate you for dropping by. Much love, always!
Heart beats felt
ear to my heart
your name spelt
AB and his magic 🙂 Beautiful! Appreciate you gracing this space with your words..thank you 🙂
There is some misunderstanding here…magic only flows from one end…that is yours. My country boy babble is just try to compensate for the lack of proper praise and admiration for such beauty in words.
haha oh AB! whatever little good there is, is from the Divine..you’re wayyy too kind ❤
You are way too humble, surely that is a sign 🙂
sublime is one of my favorite words. It’s just one of those words that you can almost know what the word means the first time you ever see it. The sound of the word itself is sublime
It is mine too! And I agree, its very sound tastes good. Thank you for stopping by 🙂
so nishhhhhhhhhhhh..you make me happy 😛
And seeing you happy makes me more happy! 🙂 Thank you Iku!
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