freedom

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we chase
in holy mischief
butterflies
on a gentle breeze
giggles and laughter
amid songs of bees
like children
lost in time

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38 thoughts on “freedom

    Lisa Rosier said:
    May 12, 2014 at 5:38 pm

    Great imagery. I can visualize myself running through that field in “holy mischief.”

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      Himani B responded:
      May 12, 2014 at 6:38 pm

      Thank you 🙂 Happy to hear you liked it!

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    acuriousgal said:
    May 5, 2014 at 1:22 pm

    Love this

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    Himani B responded:
    May 3, 2014 at 7:50 pm

    why are you so weird 🙂

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    cshowers said:
    May 3, 2014 at 6:01 am

    Himani, this was truly a beautiful vision of freedom.

    God bless you,
    Cheryl

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      Himani B responded:
      May 3, 2014 at 9:50 am

      Thank you so much Cheryl, appreciate your kind words 🙂 May you stay blessed, always! Much love

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    6hellogoodbye9 said:
    May 2, 2014 at 1:04 am

    This reminds me EXACTLY of summer love. And my love for summer (: put a smile on my face with all the increasing nostalgia of one particular summer gone past and the one that has just commenced; new memories – and poetry – just make me wayyyy too happy 😀

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      Himani B responded:
      May 2, 2014 at 10:16 pm

      ah yes! new memories indeed..may they be full of love, laughter and songs 🙂 thank you so much, happy to see you happy ❤

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    pearlz said:
    May 1, 2014 at 9:05 pm

    Just lovely, delicate and tender.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 2, 2014 at 10:20 pm

      Thank you so much Pearl, appreciate your kind words 🙂

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    monochromejunkie said:
    May 1, 2014 at 3:44 pm

    This is gorgeous. Love the mood. :0)

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      Himani B responded:
      May 2, 2014 at 10:19 pm

      Thank you so much, glad you like it 🙂 much love

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    macjam47 said:
    May 1, 2014 at 3:42 pm

    Very beautiful.

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      Himani B responded:
      May 2, 2014 at 10:19 pm

      Thank you so much Michelle, always lovely to see you around 🙂 much love x

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    fergusandthedruid said:
    May 1, 2014 at 3:28 pm

    I like this! Reminds me of this conjoined tanka I wrote two days ago!

    “Host of a Ghost”
    by Ry Hakari

    Phantom pregnancies’
    bellies full of butterflies
    from inner children’s
    parent’s retrospection of
    first flutterings, ricochet
    through hearts rapidly
    like love hurricanes in blood
    as déjà vu dreams
    dizzying them, enchant with
    true love’s magical feelings

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      Himani B responded:
      May 2, 2014 at 10:18 pm

      I love yours more! Thank you for sharing that and dropping by, I totally dig your rich vocab and the way you weave..exquisite! 🙂

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    racheltoalson said:
    May 1, 2014 at 11:07 am

    So good!

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      Himani B responded:
      May 2, 2014 at 10:08 pm

      Thank you Rachel, appreciate it 🙂

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    mfitz said:
    May 1, 2014 at 10:43 am

    This imagery is beautiful, “like children lost in time”….:)

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      Himani B responded:
      May 2, 2014 at 10:08 pm

      thank you so much, happy to hear you liked it 🙂

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    Robert said:
    May 1, 2014 at 10:26 am

    Dear Himani,

    Thank you for this wonderful poem. We are indeed like children lost in time.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      May 2, 2014 at 10:09 pm

      We sure are, Robert..may we never lose that innocence 🙂 Stay blessed, always!

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    Line said:
    May 1, 2014 at 10:03 am

    Oh, I love this so much Himani! 🙂 It is soft and gently and joyful and that always resonates with me 🙂 My relation with God is little bit like that, a mix between a child-parent relation and best friends! 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 2, 2014 at 10:28 pm

      Always makes me happy to hear that Line 🙂 Thank you so much for your kind words and presence..I really love and treasure it! And yes, I have a very similar relationship with the Divine and as someone put it in words –

      God and I have become two giant fat people living in a tiny boat. We keep bumping into each other and laughing.

      🙂 Much love, always..sending my good wishes your way!

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    SalvaVenia said:
    May 1, 2014 at 9:12 am

    Like todays sunshine morning warming the soul. 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 2, 2014 at 10:29 pm

      Thank you Salva, your kind words mean a lot to me 🙂 much love

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        SalvaVenia said:
        May 3, 2014 at 6:01 am

        Have a nice and enjoybale weekend. 🙂

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    Morgan said:
    May 1, 2014 at 9:10 am

    So Lovely 🙂 Love the Lighting in the Image too 🙂 Thank you for sharing the Wealth of your Inspiration 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 1, 2014 at 10:43 am

      Thank you dear Morgan ❤ May we never lose our muse 😉

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    Writing to Freedom said:
    May 1, 2014 at 9:08 am

    Hi Himani. This is a whimsical poem with a perfect photo so we can all dance in the field with bees and butterflies! 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      May 1, 2014 at 10:42 am

      Indeed Brad, we all can..at any given time..under the sun, under the rain 🙂 Thank you for stopping by..wishing you much love and light!

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    M. Zane McClellan said:
    May 1, 2014 at 9:00 am

    Very Nice. Thanks. Peace. ~ Michael

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      Himani B responded:
      May 1, 2014 at 10:39 am

      Thank you Michael 🙂 Blessings and peace.

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    drapersmeadow4 said:
    May 1, 2014 at 8:55 am

    Light and free…like springtime! Makes me smile! 🙂 ~Karen~

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      Himani B responded:
      May 1, 2014 at 10:39 am

      Thanks a lot Karen, happy to hear it made you smile 🙂 ❤

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    richardankerswrites said:
    May 1, 2014 at 8:47 am

    Lovely

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