eternal presence

Posted on April 2, 2014 Updated on October 6, 2016

your scent
fills the air
I breathe

your maddening caress
imbues the thoughts
I concieve

we’re galaxies apart

yet you are the one
throbbing
in each beat

This entry was posted in art, haiku, poetry and tagged beauty, Beloved, divine, free verse, galaxy, gratitude, haiku, heart, life, light, love, poem, poetry, presence, scent, soul, sufi, thoughts, truth, Universe.

31 thoughts on “eternal presence”

Noora said:
April 7, 2014 at 4:46 pm

Beautifully profound

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franiel32 said:
April 3, 2014 at 10:33 pm

Reblogged this on franiel32.

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Phen Weston said:
April 2, 2014 at 6:51 pm

Beautiful, emotive and perfect XD

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peacefulblessedstar said:
April 2, 2014 at 6:34 pm

*enter goosebumps here*

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waitingforprincecharming said:
April 2, 2014 at 4:22 pm

I aspire to find such passion 🙂

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Himani B responded:
April 2, 2014 at 5:00 pm

I pray you do ❤ thank you for stopping by 🙂

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waitingforprincecharming said:
April 2, 2014 at 5:41 pm

Thank you for writing 🙂

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Zeeshan said:
April 2, 2014 at 2:37 pm

So wonderfully blissful, Himani!

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Himani B responded:
April 2, 2014 at 5:01 pm

appreciate that Zeeshan, thank you :)) much love!

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heavenhappens said:
April 2, 2014 at 2:33 pm

Oh this gorgeous x such powerful emotions expressed with such style!

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Himani B responded:
April 2, 2014 at 5:02 pm

thank you so much for your kind words, much appreciated 🙂

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redgladiola said:
April 2, 2014 at 12:13 pm

I love the first two stanza’s especially — it shows how much the narrator depends/reacts to the the person they love. ❤

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Himani B responded:
April 2, 2014 at 5:05 pm

Someone once said – May you be loved to the point of madness. In human experience, love being conditional it is pretty rare.. but I can assure you when it comes to the Divine 🙂 thank you for stopping by ❤

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stanjonagasaki said:
April 2, 2014 at 12:13 pm

A cosmic union, a bond that remains strong no matter the supposed distance.

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Himani B responded:
April 2, 2014 at 5:06 pm

Thats beautifully put, Stan 🙂 Thank you so much!

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Robert said:
April 2, 2014 at 11:43 am

Dear Himani,

Thank you for this! The words and art are beautiful.

Maddening caress…what a powerful expression. I like how this poem conveys that there seems to be an immeasureable distance, but yet He is ever-present in the heart.

All good wishes,

robert

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Himani B responded:
April 2, 2014 at 5:08 pm

Very much so, dear Robert 🙂 So far, yet so near! I am very happy to hear you liked this, appreciate your kind words. Stay blessed, always!

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F.G.M. said:
April 2, 2014 at 10:08 am

Wonderful poem. Merci! FGM

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Himani B responded:
April 2, 2014 at 5:08 pm

many thanks FGM, happy to hear you ejoyed this 🙂 much love

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