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even the tears
quietly smile

when they see
you soaked in me
and me drenched in you

h

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    Brenda said:
    March 27, 2014 at 11:00 pm

    I love this photo, I could look at it every day. And your poetry is so beautiful. I’m sad I miss so much in my reader.

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    Noora said:
    March 23, 2014 at 5:00 pm

    Bravo!!!!!! LOVE this.

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      Himani B responded:
      March 26, 2014 at 12:24 pm

      :)) means a lot dear Noora! thank you so much!

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    marcus said:
    March 19, 2014 at 11:49 pm

    tears of joy
    stunning poem
    ((Awhoooo))

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    Robert said:
    March 19, 2014 at 7:45 pm

    Dear Himani,

    Thank you for this very lovely poem.

    The words, the tone, the art, all point to the thirsty desiring water, but also to water desiring the thirsty.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      March 19, 2014 at 10:37 pm

      Dearest Robert, thank you 🙂 and yess! I love and appreciate your thoughtful feedback, always makes me go back and reflect. Thank you for continuing to visit, means a lot!

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    Writing to Freedom said:
    March 19, 2014 at 10:09 am

    I agree with Line. Your poems are liquid love. This body/ being is thirsty for more and grateful for you and your words to refresh my soul. blessings,

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      Himani B responded:
      March 19, 2014 at 10:34 pm

      Thanks a lot Brad, you’re very kind. If there is any good here its a blessing from beyond..I’m just a humble instrument 🙂 I hope and pray you’re doing amazing, stay blessed!

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    Line said:
    March 19, 2014 at 10:01 am

    Oh, Himani! Your poems are like liquid Love seeping through every part of my soul! I am drenched in the beauty you create with your words! 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      March 19, 2014 at 10:32 pm

      ah aren’t you the sweetest! thank you so much Line ❤

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    1421art said:
    March 19, 2014 at 9:59 am

    Thanks for a beautiful start to my day.

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      Himani B responded:
      March 19, 2014 at 10:26 pm

      You’re too kind, thank you 🙂

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