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two spirits
gently unfold
as they are carried across
a sacred river flow

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    Rexie said:
    March 14, 2014 at 4:53 pm

    Himiiiii….This reminds me of this picture of mine of two leaves. You should have written something for that one too love, gorgeous poet that you are!

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      Himani B responded:
      March 14, 2014 at 9:52 pm

      oh yesss, I remember that picture! 😀 I still love it as much! thank you so much, appreciate you here 🙂

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    nowandzenn said:
    March 14, 2014 at 12:41 pm

    I really like this. I am kind of new to your work (you “liked” my blog a few weeks ago). I like the simplicity of your verses – They often have a Zen-like quality to them. This particular piece touches me because my wife just passed away last Saturday morning and I am still grieving her loss. She was my twin spirit and we believed in living simply and there is a simplicity to your verse, and to the image, that makes me think of her and I. Thank you. ~ John

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      Himani B responded:
      March 14, 2014 at 10:08 pm

      Dear John, thank you so much for being here and sharing that. I am extremely sorry to hear about your loss, may her beautiful spirit rest in peace. I also pray that you find strength in this tough time to cope. If this reminded you of her in any way, I am only grateful. I do feel your pain and love for her in your words..will definitely pray for her and you. Thank you again. Wishing you much love and light *hug*

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    lumar1298 said:
    March 14, 2014 at 12:39 pm

    Ooooo…. Lovely…

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      Himani B responded:
      March 14, 2014 at 10:09 pm

      thank you so much Lumar, much appreciated 🙂

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    Robert said:
    March 14, 2014 at 8:32 am

    Dear Himani,

    Thank you very much for this very beautiful poem and art. The unfolding can be lovely.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      March 14, 2014 at 10:10 pm

      Indeed Robert 🙂 Thanks a lot for being here and sharing your feedback, it means a lot to me! Best wishes, always!

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    noellevignola said:
    March 14, 2014 at 7:19 am

    Perfection. Just beautiful. The image just raises the whole piece up.

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      Himani B responded:
      March 14, 2014 at 10:10 pm

      Noelle ❤ thank you soo much! Happy to hear you liked it 🙂

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    b.l. ronan said:
    March 14, 2014 at 6:27 am

    Lovely and delicate x

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      Himani B responded:
      March 14, 2014 at 10:12 pm

      makes me happy to hear you liked it b, thanks a lot for your kind words 🙂

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    geoffreylake said:
    March 14, 2014 at 5:00 am

    Three spirits transfix
    But are eternally
    Separated
    By the sacred rivers flow

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      Himani B responded:
      March 14, 2014 at 10:14 pm

      ah yes, very clever 🙂 it could be three too but three is never the best in any love situation. thank you for sharing that Geoffrey!

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    errantsatiety said:
    March 14, 2014 at 4:49 am

    So very tender *smiles softly*

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      Himani B responded:
      March 14, 2014 at 10:16 pm

      thank you so much! I am smiling to see you smile 🙂 appreciate you here!

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    Line said:
    March 14, 2014 at 1:10 am

    Oh, you write so beautifully! I cannot express loudly enough how much I adore your poetry! 🙂 Every single one of your poems touches my heart in some way! Thank you so much for that! 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      March 14, 2014 at 10:18 pm

      Line ❤ and I adore you! I really do! it makes me very happy to hear you resonate with my sacred space, thank you for being here..looking forward to visiting your blog in a day or two 🙂 much much love!

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    hadorable said:
    March 14, 2014 at 1:08 am

    Love your soft and light words as always

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      Himani B responded:
      March 14, 2014 at 10:19 pm

      thank you h ❤ so grateful to have you onboard! much love 🙂

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