resounding particles
the sun rises
burns brightly
shows its might
then dies a death
in your world every night;
the full moon
in all its beauty
waxes and wanes
how many times
have you looked up at the sky
and noticed all this change?
people walk into your life
play different roles
give you love
nourish your souls,
give you reasons
to shed tears
or to laugh
over the years!
but when their time comes
they go their way
leaving you
by yourself
just like the day you first came
you, mortal being
with immortal soul
few more years
or who knows how many days
or how many breaths
you have at stake
what did you do today
to make a heart smile
soothe someone’s ache?
what did you give away
that made you richer
than yesterday?
how did you please your Beloved
knowing, that in the end
its only between you and Him
did you pause to reflect, to think
or went about unaware, unconscious
like every other day
acting on your whims?
May 20, 2014 at 5:43 am
Your poem gives words to my heart’s trembling. Amazing! It’s truly a gift from the Divine.
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May 21, 2014 at 12:12 am
And on hearing that my heart smiles, thank you 🙂 Glad you could resonate, Sean x
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March 21, 2014 at 1:37 pm
The image reminds me my own experience. That was exactly how, at three/four year old I used to guide my great grand father home from the main gate. I remember crying,” Nana aa gaye, Nana aa gaye..” after hearing his staff (laathi) hit the ground repeatedly, which he did deliberately for my sake.
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March 21, 2014 at 7:04 pm
That’s so sweet to hear Mr. Akhtar 🙂 thank you for sharing that! Appreciate your visit..wishing you the best 🙂
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March 21, 2014 at 1:29 pm
you, mortal being
with immortal soul
the poem is great and true. If this catches on there will be no sorrow and no war here. Kaash…..
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February 8, 2014 at 3:09 am
Gorgeous shot, it has such great feeling
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February 4, 2014 at 1:54 am
All the grace in its gaze, God Bless
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February 2, 2014 at 5:12 pm
Such a beautiful soul, and to be blessed with your artistic talent in a way that shares your beautiful light, it is define. I thank younger sharing yourself so openly, so freely. I adore you 🙂
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February 2, 2014 at 5:14 pm
*devine
**you for
Oh my, typos!
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February 3, 2014 at 11:45 am
I adore you right back..it takes one to see one, my dearest! 😊 you being here means a lot to me, thank you for being so kind with you words! much love 😊
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February 2, 2014 at 3:30 pm
Reblogged this on Keptmeprisoner and commented:
As the sun rises i live an learn, to those i know time to gather as to the war begin…
That is my wish!
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February 3, 2014 at 11:50 am
thank you so much dear Chris! appreciate your kind gestures 🙂
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February 2, 2014 at 2:41 pm
beautiful ❤
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February 3, 2014 at 11:50 am
thank you so much 😊❤️
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February 2, 2014 at 2:12 pm
Tender and heart filled words Himani. They certainly made my heart smile.
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February 3, 2014 at 11:51 am
thanks a lot David, your kind words are much appreciated 😊 wishing you much Love and Light!
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February 2, 2014 at 1:29 pm
Greetings,
Thank you for this lovely formula for life! You have so beautifully expressed a description of life-wisdom.
The photograph is so lovely.
All good wishes,
robert
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February 3, 2014 at 11:58 am
heartfelt thanks Robert, I am nothing. I just share what I receive 😊 but your words and feedback means a lot to me..appreciate them! all my best wishes, always!
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February 2, 2014 at 12:00 pm
very profound and thought provoking,Himani
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February 3, 2014 at 11:59 am
thank you so much Soumya..appreciate it 😊
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February 2, 2014 at 11:23 am
Reblogged this on Hunt FOR Truth on wordpress and commented:
I really love this one!
Thanks.
~ Eric
ALSO see: http://gigisrantsandraves.wordpress.com/
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February 3, 2014 at 12:02 pm
thanks a lot Eric, glad to hear you liked it 😊 and for reblog too.. appreciate it!
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February 3, 2014 at 12:24 pm
WOW – thank you… Himani;
I so rarely write poetry anymore myself – yet, I notice here at wordpress that poetry beckons to order and to our transformational soul memories – there is a tremendous outpouring of spirit of love, of healing, of feeling, of lessons – and your poem “sees” these blessings. THANK YOU.
Blessings.
~ Eric
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February 2, 2014 at 11:12 am
Wonderfully written 🙂
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February 3, 2014 at 12:01 pm
thank you Melanie, you’re too kind 😊
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February 2, 2014 at 11:08 am
Beautiful…a stunning work of word art…howls
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February 3, 2014 at 12:04 pm
*howls back* thank you dear marcus..your visit and kind words are much appreciated 😊
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February 2, 2014 at 10:53 am
but when their time comes
they go their way
leaving you
by yourself
just like the day you first came…..
the most beautiful lines… loved it
u r amazing..
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February 3, 2014 at 12:06 pm
only as amazing as you, aiman! 😊 thank you so much for being here..much appreciated! I wish you all the very best 😊
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February 4, 2014 at 12:29 am
thanks for the best of luck… and itz ma pleasure to read ua posts….:D
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February 2, 2014 at 10:52 am
Love it. Truly beautiful.
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February 3, 2014 at 12:05 pm
thank you so much, my dear ❤️
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February 2, 2014 at 10:50 am
Reblogged this on ensuing light… and commented:
the biggest truth of the life n this world but beautified in these simple sentences enigmatically… loved the flow
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February 3, 2014 at 12:08 pm
thank you so much aiman 😊
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February 4, 2014 at 12:29 am
my pleasure himanii….
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February 2, 2014 at 10:48 am
and I knew you would! you kinda inspired the thought process..will share later when we talk..many thanks! 😃
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February 2, 2014 at 10:40 am
Himani, I just wrote (did not post) “When is the last time you watched the stars appear in a night’s sky?” How many of us walk around unawares, just going through the motions, disconnected from Souce? Too many. I know myself when I am connected and then the times I am not.
Beautiful touching words. Thank you for sharing your Gift! Love, Amy
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February 2, 2014 at 10:52 am
why didn’t you post Amy? you should! ah so very true. trying to live in the moment and enjoy the beauty that surrounds us at all times for a little while now. being connected, as you mentioned, is definitely one of the most beautiful experiences out there 😊 pleasure having you onboard..thanks a lot for being here. much love, always! 😊
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February 2, 2014 at 12:54 pm
Sometimes I write things and afterwords I think twice about them. Now that you have said something, I will make sure this does get posted. I also do my posts ahead of time, and if there are many, some get lost way down on the bottom of the list until I dig them out.
(((HUGS))) Himani. I’m still a work in progress. All my life I’ve had basically rotten eggs thrown at me and it still takes courage for me to post. With people like you in my life, it gets easier. xxoo, Amy
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February 2, 2014 at 10:33 am
Beautiful. 😉
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February 2, 2014 at 10:46 am
thank you Cynthia, appreciate that! 😉
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February 2, 2014 at 10:23 am
Wonderful poem. You just taught me something very important and I’m so grateful. I wrote about your poem and what I learned on my blog, a few minutes ago. I don’t know how to send it to you, I’m sorry about that, so please check it out. Thank you again, my friend.
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February 2, 2014 at 10:45 am
many thanks hitandrun, like I mentioned .. enjoyed your beautiful, wise insight. wishing you much Love and Light 😊
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February 2, 2014 at 10:11 am
Truly Lovely!
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February 2, 2014 at 10:44 am
thanks a lot Morgan! 😊
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