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trailing sweetness
of pure surrender
what shadows cannot touch

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    randomlyabstract said:
    January 6, 2014 at 7:56 am

    Amazing way you’ve with words.

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      Himani B responded:
      January 15, 2014 at 10:24 am

      ah you’re too kind, thank you so much ♥

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    Apurva said:
    January 4, 2014 at 9:15 pm

    amazing…there is romance in your words….love it 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      January 15, 2014 at 10:24 am

      thank you dear Apurva, and I love it when I see you here in this space 🙂

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    stockresearch52 said:
    January 3, 2014 at 8:26 pm

    I like your “what shadows cannot touch”.

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    thisoldtoad2014 said:
    January 3, 2014 at 8:08 pm

    Reblogged this on Keptmeprisoner and commented:
    i’m loving shadows…

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    Rexie said:
    January 3, 2014 at 2:01 pm

    I second on you that Ihsan! Totally. We must have a love button on this blog for sure 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      January 15, 2014 at 10:33 am

      haha thank you!! you guys are too sweet. appreciate it 🙂

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    fergusandthedruid said:
    January 3, 2014 at 12:36 pm

    Ah, reminds me of a Shadorma poem I wrote today I’ll share below. I like your poem!

    “Shadorma — Will-’o-the-Wisp’s Shadow Tears Chase Banshee Who’s Moved Away”
    by Ry Hakari

    Willow beau,
    up early, mourning
    Fleeting love’s
    shadow chase —
    Rays of light cast tears across
    everlong distance…………………………………

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      Rexie said:
      January 3, 2014 at 2:02 pm

      Ah, what beautiful lines!

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        fergusandthedruid said:
        January 3, 2014 at 2:52 pm

        Thank you Rexie! The post I shared it in, I shared with what are probably even more beautiful lines by some other writers, and a couple musicians, that when read along with my poem, give my poem a more beautiful context that it may seem to have when it stands alone.

        This is the post I posted it in, if you are curious and wanting to read the other writer’s more beautiful words (my real objective opinion, though I may seem to smell of repugnant false humility. lol My poem is only one facet of the whole of what I believe was a collectively beautiful post… I didn’t even post my own poem at the beginning of it as I sometimes do. most of my posts that have my own writings in them, I pair with words by others that I admire who inspire me creatively!) – http://21shadesofblue.com/2014/01/03/shadorma-will-o-the-wisps-shadow-tears-chase-banshee-whos-moved-away-combinatorial-creativity/

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    Daniel Ionson said:
    January 3, 2014 at 11:40 am

    The mark of excellent poetry/prose is to pack as much meaning into a few words as possible. That’s what you excel at.

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      Himani B responded:
      January 15, 2014 at 10:34 am

      and you’re too kind Daniel, thank you so much! 🙂

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    Robert said:
    January 3, 2014 at 10:43 am

    Greetings,

    Beautiful!

    Thank you for this about what shadows cannot touch.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      January 15, 2014 at 10:36 am

      thanks a lot Robert 🙂 your kind words and persistent feedback means a lot to me!

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    Noora said:
    January 3, 2014 at 10:09 am

    My heart melts!

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      Himani B responded:
      January 15, 2014 at 10:34 am

      nooraaa ♥ thank you!!

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    Nomad of Woods said:
    January 3, 2014 at 9:59 am

    Wow…very simple but stunning!

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      Himani B responded:
      January 15, 2014 at 10:35 am

      thanks a lot, appreciate that 🙂

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