Posted on January 3, 2014
of pure surrender
what shadows cannot touch
This entry was posted in haiku, poetry and tagged light, poem, poetry, shadows, sun, sunshine, surrender, sweetness, trail.
Amazing way you’ve with words.
ah you’re too kind, thank you so much ♥
amazing…there is romance in your words….love it 🙂
thank you dear Apurva, and I love it when I see you here in this space 🙂
I like your “what shadows cannot touch”.
thank you 🙂
Reblogged this on Keptmeprisoner and commented:
i’m loving shadows…
I second on you that Ihsan! Totally. We must have a love button on this blog for sure 🙂
haha thank you!! you guys are too sweet. appreciate it 🙂
Ah, reminds me of a Shadorma poem I wrote today I’ll share below. I like your poem!
“Shadorma — Will-’o-the-Wisp’s Shadow Tears Chase Banshee Who’s Moved Away”
by Ry Hakari
up early, mourning
shadow chase —
Rays of light cast tears across
Ah, what beautiful lines!
Thank you Rexie! The post I shared it in, I shared with what are probably even more beautiful lines by some other writers, and a couple musicians, that when read along with my poem, give my poem a more beautiful context that it may seem to have when it stands alone.
This is the post I posted it in, if you are curious and wanting to read the other writer’s more beautiful words (my real objective opinion, though I may seem to smell of repugnant false humility. lol My poem is only one facet of the whole of what I believe was a collectively beautiful post… I didn’t even post my own poem at the beginning of it as I sometimes do. most of my posts that have my own writings in them, I pair with words by others that I admire who inspire me creatively!) – http://21shadesofblue.com/2014/01/03/shadorma-will-o-the-wisps-shadow-tears-chase-banshee-whos-moved-away-combinatorial-creativity/
The mark of excellent poetry/prose is to pack as much meaning into a few words as possible. That’s what you excel at.
and you’re too kind Daniel, thank you so much! 🙂
Thank you for this about what shadows cannot touch.
All good wishes,
thanks a lot Robert 🙂 your kind words and persistent feedback means a lot to me!
My heart melts!
nooraaa ♥ thank you!!
Wow…very simple but stunning!
thanks a lot, appreciate that 🙂
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