sublime reunion
awake at night, I delight
in conversations
with the light
stars wheel above my head
with them, I keep spinning
I keep spinning in ecstasy
on a carpet white
if I had words,
I would explain
how mad and frenzied
I am carried across the universe
in that silent flight!
∙ tenderheartmusings ∙ 
December 2, 2013 at 12:51 am
Erm, Still awaiting a revert! 😦
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December 2, 2013 at 11:22 am
I will, I will..give me some time 🙂
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December 1, 2013 at 10:53 pm
Our nocturnal cosmic journey is wonderfully put into words!
Thank you!
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December 2, 2013 at 11:23 am
thank you Sanjida, lovely to hear you can relate! wish you best on more beautiful cosmic journeys 🙂
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December 1, 2013 at 5:16 pm
A divine read. Truly.
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December 2, 2013 at 11:23 am
thank you Thamyris, makes me happy to hear that 🙂
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November 30, 2013 at 9:01 pm
So beautiful!
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December 1, 2013 at 4:15 pm
thank you theresa, appreciate it 🙂
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December 1, 2013 at 4:16 pm
😀
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November 30, 2013 at 2:16 pm
Lovely! Your writing provokes my imagination to work overtime. It’s such a pleasing experience to read your work 🙂
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November 29, 2013 at 11:29 pm
Nothing as beautiful as a clear night sky. I was in the Army for 15 years. I was send to place where there were no cities or factories. In the desert and tropical forest. The sky can steal your vision. The good description took me to good places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
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December 1, 2013 at 4:15 pm
thank you for sharing that John, I can imagine how amazing that experience might be. the cosmos have always fascinated me, thank you for dropping by..appreciate that 🙂
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November 29, 2013 at 12:10 pm
This is absolutely captivating poem, Himani. Beautiful work – as always.
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November 29, 2013 at 6:42 pm
Noora! many thanks for your kind words, appreciate your feedback .. lovely to hear that you enjoyed some of the recent poems 🙂 ♥
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November 29, 2013 at 11:40 am
Marvelous Post and a truly Beautiful Image. 🙂
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November 29, 2013 at 6:41 pm
you’re too kind Morgan, thank you 🙂
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November 29, 2013 at 11:15 am
mesmerizing and beautiful
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November 29, 2013 at 11:15 am
mesmerizing and beautiful
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November 29, 2013 at 6:40 pm
thanks a lot Soumya, appreciate it 🙂
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November 29, 2013 at 10:22 am
Everytime, trust me every single time I read your posts..it’s like I read your mind..how do you weave such imagery..I’ve read a lot of poems..poems that speak darkness and truth..the way you convey is beyond the dots at the end of the last novel.. I’m so inspired..I am not able to contain myself…the stream in me is fervent..waiting in the dark may it be for ages to know a human like you!! You literally write all the little gestures that your mind incorporates..I would want to know you and you soul that doesn’t dwell in you which treads beyond nothingness!!
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November 29, 2013 at 6:49 pm
I dont know what to say Aniket, its very heartwarming to read your kind comment. if I consciously had woven words, I would tell you how I do it..but even I am not aware how that happens. yes indeed, I do feel naked at times here, that different kind of nakedness. but I am thrilled to hear that it did make a positive difference there, however little. as far as getting to know me is concerned..umm lets see, we could catch a conversation sometime if you like? do you have fb?
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November 30, 2013 at 12:46 am
Glad for your time and your revert!! Oh well, apologies but I don’t exist on fb..does gmail work for you! If yes, drop me a mail at iamesoteric123@gmail.com
Awaiting your mail
Regards,
Aniket
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November 29, 2013 at 9:25 am
…so lovely, Himani!
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November 29, 2013 at 6:40 pm
thank you Julie ♥
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November 29, 2013 at 9:23 am
what a flight…
thank you!
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November 29, 2013 at 6:39 pm
pleasure to have you onboard momix, thank you 🙂
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November 29, 2013 at 8:41 am
Very nice. Have you tried writing in blank verse? I sometimes feel that rhyme can obscure/overshadow the intended meaning of a poem.
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November 29, 2013 at 6:39 pm
thank you 🙂 yes, indeed, most poetry here is actually written in blank verse. I don’t plan on writing either when it flows, the way it comes to me..it appears here. did you feel the rhyme obscured the meaning here? thank you for the feedback 🙂
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November 29, 2013 at 7:31 pm
I think what matters is if you felt that what you wrote made sense. Interpretations by others are, after all secondary, and often dependent on their own subjectivity.
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November 29, 2013 at 7:32 pm
but I never know if my words make sense lol and like I said, i don’t intend to write in a certain way, it just happens 🙂
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November 29, 2013 at 8:18 pm
Nice, that’s the way I write as well.
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November 29, 2013 at 8:34 am
the night holds so much allure and mystery, as do the stars and the Universe and how beautifully you’ve captured that in your poem.
just beautiful Himani, i enjoyed this immensely,
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November 29, 2013 at 6:37 pm
thank you so much for your kind words, great to hear that you enjoyed it! 🙂 as much as I love the light, I revel in the darkness. between the two..my life, just like this poetry, moves.
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November 29, 2013 at 7:48 am
Greetings,
Beautiful!
“If I had words…” conveys how the tongue may become intoxicated, and the mind silent and powerless over the heart.
Thank you for this.
All good wishes,
robert
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November 29, 2013 at 2:21 pm
thank you so much Robert, I am with you on that one 🙂 appreciate your feedback and nice to see you here, as always. hope you’re having a lovely day!
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November 29, 2013 at 7:32 am
very very nice my friend:)
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November 29, 2013 at 7:43 am
thank you dearest omtatjuan, appreciate that 🙂
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