divine ushering

Posted on November 13, 2013

take me to the place
where peaceful waters flow
where rain glistens on the leaves
a cool, gentle breeze blows

where the keys unlock
unleashing pure understanding
appealing to my parched senses
giving each breath, a new meaning

take me to that shore far away
where rapture and love washes the sand
with each crashing wave
where hopeful hours and innocent kisses
fill a careless day

with you, take me to the heights
where we can soar
two souls, spilling untamed joy
in a laughing sky
seeking nothing more

This entry was posted in poetry and tagged divine, height, hopeful, innocent, keys, leaves, peaceful, rain, shore, soar, soul, unleash, untamed, ushering, wave.

59 thoughts on “divine ushering”

Vashi Chandi said:
February 4, 2014 at 2:30 am

The ocean shines within you, God Bless

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hitandrun1964 said:
December 5, 2013 at 10:17 pm

So beautiful.

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Himani B responded:
December 6, 2013 at 10:11 pm

thank you, appreciate that 🙂

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Samra said:
December 1, 2013 at 6:14 pm

I can read this over and over! Beautiful and what is your process of writing.

Stay inspiring x

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johncoyote said:
November 29, 2013 at 11:32 pm

The poem is amazing. I like and understand the desire of this poem. Would be nice to find a place where can know contentment. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

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summerstommy2 said:
November 29, 2013 at 7:34 pm

Lovely Himani, I like the idea of wishful thinking and desire. Well captured.

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Himani B responded:
December 1, 2013 at 6:28 pm

thanks so much, appreciate it 🙂

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rita kowats said:
November 28, 2013 at 6:25 pm

Thank you for pushing me out to those edges, Himani. This is beautiful.

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Himani B responded:
November 29, 2013 at 7:02 pm

thank you Rita, great to hear it made a little difference there, however small. I wish you the best 🙂

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marcus said:
November 21, 2013 at 11:34 pm

Beautifully written. You captured bliss.

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Himani B responded:
November 25, 2013 at 8:51 pm

you’re too kind marcus, thank you!

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danblaga said:
November 21, 2013 at 7:21 am

Beautiful poem … but about it’s message – what I see to be in it’s message – can anyone take you to a place like the one you dream? Can something outside yourself take you there?

Just asking myself and you 🙂

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Himani B responded:
November 25, 2013 at 8:57 pm

your comment made me smile, danblaga 🙂 besides one’s own self..mayyybe a soulmate? perhaps someone whose very essence resonates with yours?

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Adam Hughes said:
November 17, 2013 at 2:50 pm

Reblogged this on Freedom for Cetaceans Writers Corner.

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Alabaster Wisteria said:
November 16, 2013 at 4:24 am

Oh my, what vivid imagery! ❤

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Himani B responded:
November 16, 2013 at 5:39 am

thanks a lot Alabaster 🙂 ♥

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IdealisticRebel said:
November 16, 2013 at 1:37 am

You write with great wisdom. I will be back to understand what moves you. Hugs, Barbara

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Himani B responded:
November 16, 2013 at 5:47 am

Thank you Barbara, you are so kind. I am not sure about wisdom..still a kid at heart trying to understand this world, to learn from experiences and to be more in tune with the Beloved, universe and my own sacred self 🙂 *hugs*

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IdealisticRebel said:
November 16, 2013 at 12:47 pm

My inner child is alive and well. It is a good thing. I am 63 and I am still the best toy for my grandchildren. You are in tune as am I. Remember, you are a child of the Universe. Hugs, Barbara

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Holistic Wayfarer said:
November 14, 2013 at 10:38 pm

I like the parched senses and the ending.

Did you mean “wash” because it’s plural for the double subject?

where rapture and love washes

(Please delete this part of comment. =) )

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Himani B responded:
November 15, 2013 at 7:12 pm

thank you Holistic Wayfarer 🙂 and haha English is my third language, you’re probably right 😀 glad you mentioned!

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Holistic Wayfarer said:
November 15, 2013 at 11:25 pm

Hats off to you. I wish I were fluent in three tongues. You’re doing a FABULOUS job writing out here.

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Beth Walsh's Photoblog said:
November 14, 2013 at 4:44 pm

A beautiful poem and photo. Well done!

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Himani B responded:
November 14, 2013 at 7:38 pm

thanks a lot Beth, appreciate that 🙂

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donbyroncortez said:
November 14, 2013 at 4:44 pm

Beautifully written!

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Himani B responded:
November 14, 2013 at 7:37 pm

thank you so much 🙂

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donbyroncortez said:
February 21, 2014 at 10:13 am

You’re welcome!

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Saheli said:
November 14, 2013 at 9:42 am

I absolutely loved the last stanza. Beautiful words!

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Himani B responded:
November 14, 2013 at 10:22 am

thanks so much Saheli, happy to hear you could resonate 🙂

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djmrakiey said:
November 14, 2013 at 7:59 am

Words of divine connection… nicely done !

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Himani B responded:
November 14, 2013 at 10:22 am

many thanks djmrakiey, I appreciate your kind words 🙂

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djmrakiey said:
November 14, 2013 at 10:22 am

my pleasure

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erobles1963 said:
November 14, 2013 at 7:30 am

Such a beautiful poem ❤

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Himani B responded:
November 14, 2013 at 10:21 am

thank you so much erobles ♥

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Wendell A. Brown said:
November 14, 2013 at 6:21 am

The words I may speak would never be able to do justice in describing the loveliness of your poem…simply outstanding!!!!!!

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Himani B responded:
November 14, 2013 at 10:20 am

my heart bows in gratitude, thank you for your kind, generous words dear Wendell..I appreciate them 🙂

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Harsha said:
November 14, 2013 at 1:17 am

This made my mind Calm…Very Nice Line Himani.. 😀

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Himani B responded:
November 14, 2013 at 10:19 am

did it? 😀 thank you and I am very glad to hear the words came across that way!

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Harsha said:
November 14, 2013 at 11:09 am

Yes it Did.. 😀

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orijinalchris said:
November 14, 2013 at 12:32 am

your photo?

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Himani B responded:
November 14, 2013 at 10:54 am

nah google images for the win. tried looking for the photographer for the credits but no luck 😦

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amitanshushukla said:
November 13, 2013 at 9:00 pm

Amazing…
you strike sheer beauty with vocabulary…

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Himani B responded:
November 14, 2013 at 10:18 am

thats kind of you to say, amitanshu..thank you so much 🙂

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Noora said:
November 13, 2013 at 2:38 pm

“take me to that shore far away
where rapture and love washes the sand
with each crashing wave
where hopeful hours and innocent kisses
fill a careless day”
ahh, my heart melts. This is so beautiful, Himani. xo

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Himani B responded:
November 13, 2013 at 7:57 pm

and it makes me very grateful to hear that, thank you..I had a feeling you’ll like this one in particular 😀 much love xox

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