divine ushering

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take me to the place
where peaceful waters flow
where rain glistens on the leaves
a cool, gentle breeze blows

where the keys unlock
unleashing pure understanding
appealing to my parched senses
giving each breath, a new meaning

take me to that shore far away
where rapture and love washes the sand
with each crashing wave
where hopeful hours and innocent kisses
fill a careless day

with you, take me to the heights
where we can soar
two souls, spilling untamed joy
in a laughing sky
seeking nothing more

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59 thoughts on “divine ushering

    Vashi Chandi said:
    February 4, 2014 at 2:30 am

    The ocean shines within you, God Bless

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    hitandrun1964 said:
    December 5, 2013 at 10:17 pm

    So beautiful.

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      Himani B responded:
      December 6, 2013 at 10:11 pm

      thank you, appreciate that 🙂

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    Samra said:
    December 1, 2013 at 6:14 pm

    I can read this over and over! Beautiful and what is your process of writing.

    Stay inspiring x

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    johncoyote said:
    November 29, 2013 at 11:32 pm

    The poem is amazing. I like and understand the desire of this poem. Would be nice to find a place where can know contentment. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

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    summerstommy2 said:
    November 29, 2013 at 7:34 pm

    Lovely Himani, I like the idea of wishful thinking and desire. Well captured.

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      Himani B responded:
      December 1, 2013 at 6:28 pm

      thanks so much, appreciate it 🙂

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    rita kowats said:
    November 28, 2013 at 6:25 pm

    Thank you for pushing me out to those edges, Himani. This is beautiful.

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      Himani B responded:
      November 29, 2013 at 7:02 pm

      thank you Rita, great to hear it made a little difference there, however small. I wish you the best 🙂

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    marcus said:
    November 21, 2013 at 11:34 pm

    Beautifully written. You captured bliss.

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      Himani B responded:
      November 25, 2013 at 8:51 pm

      you’re too kind marcus, thank you!

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    danblaga said:
    November 21, 2013 at 7:21 am

    Beautiful poem … but about it’s message – what I see to be in it’s message – can anyone take you to a place like the one you dream? Can something outside yourself take you there?

    Just asking myself and you 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      November 25, 2013 at 8:57 pm

      your comment made me smile, danblaga 🙂 besides one’s own self..mayyybe a soulmate? perhaps someone whose very essence resonates with yours?

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    Adam Hughes said:
    November 17, 2013 at 2:50 pm
    Alabaster Wisteria said:
    November 16, 2013 at 4:24 am

    Oh my, what vivid imagery! ❤

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      Himani B responded:
      November 16, 2013 at 5:39 am

      thanks a lot Alabaster 🙂 ♥

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    IdealisticRebel said:
    November 16, 2013 at 1:37 am

    You write with great wisdom. I will be back to understand what moves you. Hugs, Barbara

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      Himani B responded:
      November 16, 2013 at 5:47 am

      Thank you Barbara, you are so kind. I am not sure about wisdom..still a kid at heart trying to understand this world, to learn from experiences and to be more in tune with the Beloved, universe and my own sacred self 🙂 *hugs*

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        IdealisticRebel said:
        November 16, 2013 at 12:47 pm

        My inner child is alive and well. It is a good thing. I am 63 and I am still the best toy for my grandchildren. You are in tune as am I. Remember, you are a child of the Universe. Hugs, Barbara

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    Holistic Wayfarer said:
    November 14, 2013 at 10:38 pm

    I like the parched senses and the ending.

    Did you mean “wash” because it’s plural for the double subject?

    where rapture and love washes

    (Please delete this part of comment. =) )

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      Himani B responded:
      November 15, 2013 at 7:12 pm

      thank you Holistic Wayfarer 🙂 and haha English is my third language, you’re probably right 😀 glad you mentioned!

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        Holistic Wayfarer said:
        November 15, 2013 at 11:25 pm

        Hats off to you. I wish I were fluent in three tongues. You’re doing a FABULOUS job writing out here.

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    Beth Walsh's Photoblog said:
    November 14, 2013 at 4:44 pm

    A beautiful poem and photo. Well done!

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      Himani B responded:
      November 14, 2013 at 7:38 pm

      thanks a lot Beth, appreciate that 🙂

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    donbyroncortez said:
    November 14, 2013 at 4:44 pm

    Beautifully written!

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    Saheli said:
    November 14, 2013 at 9:42 am

    I absolutely loved the last stanza. Beautiful words!

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      Himani B responded:
      November 14, 2013 at 10:22 am

      thanks so much Saheli, happy to hear you could resonate 🙂

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    djmrakiey said:
    November 14, 2013 at 7:59 am

    Words of divine connection… nicely done !

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      Himani B responded:
      November 14, 2013 at 10:22 am

      many thanks djmrakiey, I appreciate your kind words 🙂

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    erobles1963 said:
    November 14, 2013 at 7:30 am

    Such a beautiful poem ❤

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      Himani B responded:
      November 14, 2013 at 10:21 am

      thank you so much erobles ♥

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    Wendell A. Brown said:
    November 14, 2013 at 6:21 am

    The words I may speak would never be able to do justice in describing the loveliness of your poem…simply outstanding!!!!!!

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      Himani B responded:
      November 14, 2013 at 10:20 am

      my heart bows in gratitude, thank you for your kind, generous words dear Wendell..I appreciate them 🙂

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    Harsha said:
    November 14, 2013 at 1:17 am

    This made my mind Calm…Very Nice Line Himani.. 😀

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      Himani B responded:
      November 14, 2013 at 10:19 am

      did it? 😀 thank you and I am very glad to hear the words came across that way!

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        Harsha said:
        November 14, 2013 at 11:09 am

        Yes it Did.. 😀

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    orijinalchris said:
    November 14, 2013 at 12:32 am

    your photo?

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      Himani B responded:
      November 14, 2013 at 10:54 am

      nah google images for the win. tried looking for the photographer for the credits but no luck 😦

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    amitanshushukla said:
    November 13, 2013 at 9:00 pm

    Amazing…
    you strike sheer beauty with vocabulary…

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      Himani B responded:
      November 14, 2013 at 10:18 am

      thats kind of you to say, amitanshu..thank you so much 🙂

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    Noora said:
    November 13, 2013 at 2:38 pm

    “take me to that shore far away
    where rapture and love washes the sand
    with each crashing wave
    where hopeful hours and innocent kisses
    fill a careless day”
    ahh, my heart melts. This is so beautiful, Himani. xo

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      Himani B responded:
      November 13, 2013 at 7:57 pm

      and it makes me very grateful to hear that, thank you..I had a feeling you’ll like this one in particular 😀 much love xox

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    Avon Waters said:
    November 13, 2013 at 2:12 pm

    Love your poetry and the visuals. And thanks for the like on my site.

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      Himani B responded:
      November 13, 2013 at 7:56 pm

      thank you Avon for visiting and your kind words, appreciate them.. I enjoyed your post too 🙂

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    dawnhosking said:
    November 13, 2013 at 2:11 pm

    I love this, totally love it 😉

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      Himani B responded:
      November 13, 2013 at 7:55 pm

      and its so lovely to hear that! thank you so much 🙂

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        dawnhosking said:
        November 15, 2013 at 4:58 am

        My pleasure 😉

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    capture-monger said:
    November 13, 2013 at 12:33 pm

    Really incredible feeling of joy in this poem – thanks for that!

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      Himani B responded:
      November 13, 2013 at 12:51 pm

      its my pleasure to share Travis, I appreciate your kind words 🙂

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    Robert said:
    November 13, 2013 at 11:24 am

    Greetings,

    These words and this picture are lovely. There is a longing for something spacious that is here. So very nice.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      November 13, 2013 at 12:49 pm

      Thanks a lot Robert! after being separated from the Source, longing is all there is. appreciate you dropping by, my best wishes to you 🙂

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    Krishnan P Nair said:
    November 13, 2013 at 10:25 am

    A poem on pure joy and happiness. I should remember the lines during my ‘sad-days’. 😀

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      Himani B responded:
      November 13, 2013 at 12:48 pm

      lovely to hear you enjoyed it Krishnan, thanks so much! 🙂

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    richardankerswrites said:
    November 13, 2013 at 8:58 am

    I could read that over and over and not get bored of it. Superb.

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      Himani B responded:
      November 13, 2013 at 12:47 pm

      thats a huge compliment, Richard..my heart bows in gratitude..thank you!

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