flickering flame

Posted on November 12, 2013 Updated on November 14, 2013

quiet
is the thought of you
slow burning
through the night

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photography by M : http://myworldonmuteblog.wordpress.com

This entry was posted in haiku, photography, poetry and tagged dark, flame, flickering, haiku, night, quiet, thought.

21 thoughts on “flickering flame”

aniketmore123 said:
November 27, 2013 at 12:53 am

I’ve read this more than a couple of times now..I still tend to fathom your soul..So aesthetic imagery it weaves!!
So simple yet piercingly deep!

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Himani B responded:
November 28, 2013 at 5:20 am

you’re too kind, Aniket. thank you so much 🙂 you are trying to fathom something in whose depths I am often lost..its a bottomless abyss

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aniketmore said:
November 28, 2013 at 5:27 am

I’m glad… I have a reel in my mind that echoes *Quiet is the thought of you slowly burning through the night…* it’s so simple yet addictive!!

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sunnyi said:
November 16, 2013 at 3:24 am

That’s like a haiku. 🙂 Gets to the very core with few words. Love it. 🙂

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Himani B responded:
November 16, 2013 at 5:41 am

haha it was meant to be a haiku, I dont know what it is now 😛 but glad to hear you enjoyed, I appreciate your kind words 🙂

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sunnyi said:
November 16, 2013 at 7:51 am

You’re welcome. 🙂 Oh, I see now. Indeed. You have a whole category “haiku”… ahem. Didn’t see it, sorry. Those are especially difficult, but I really like the reduction on the essential.

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Pendryw said:
November 14, 2013 at 6:15 am

Love this. Small and beautiful. Thanks for visiting my site too.

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Himani B responded:
November 14, 2013 at 10:53 am

thank you Pendryw, appreciate that. I enjoyed my visit to your space too, all the very best to you 🙂

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Noora said:
November 13, 2013 at 2:39 pm

Wow. Wow. Wow. LOVE this.

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Himani B responded:
November 13, 2013 at 8:05 pm

many thanks Noora ♥

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richardankerswrites said:
November 13, 2013 at 2:53 am

Beautiful and strangely relaxing words

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Himani B responded:
November 13, 2013 at 8:47 am

thank you Richard, glad you liked it 🙂

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richardankerswrites said:
November 13, 2013 at 8:48 am

Very much, Himani 😄

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Harsha said:
November 13, 2013 at 1:55 am

How do you write so meaningful and lovely Lines? 😀
I wish if I could write like you.. 🙂

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Himani B responded:
November 13, 2013 at 2:39 am

you’re too sweet Harsha, thank you! I am nothing, whatever good there is, is from beyond..only the mistakes are mine 🙂

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Harsha said:
November 13, 2013 at 2:44 am

And I must say again your comment make lot more sense..See I told you–You write very beautifully.. 😀

And Yes I will take it that I am Sweet.. 😉 😛

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Himani B responded:
November 13, 2013 at 8:46 am

you sure are 🙂 thank you!

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gaylordtrotsky said:
November 12, 2013 at 7:18 pm

Reblogged this on The Poetry of GaylordTrotsky and commented:
Absolutely love this one

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Himani B responded:
November 12, 2013 at 9:30 pm

glad to hear that, many thanks 🙂

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Robert said:
November 12, 2013 at 7:09 pm

Greetings,

I very much like these words with this picture. Quiet, patient…

Thank you for them.

All good wishes,

robert

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Himani B responded:
November 12, 2013 at 9:31 pm

‘quiet and patient’ .. ah yes! thats how most people describe me too, I guess once in a while it reflects in writing. Thank you Robert, appreciate your feedback, as always 🙂 all my best wishes to you

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