flickering flame

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quiet
is the thought of you
slow burning
through the night

…..

photography by M : http://myworldonmuteblog.wordpress.com

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21 thoughts on “flickering flame

    aniketmore123 said:
    November 27, 2013 at 12:53 am

    I’ve read this more than a couple of times now..I still tend to fathom your soul..So aesthetic imagery it weaves!!
    So simple yet piercingly deep!

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      Himani B responded:
      November 28, 2013 at 5:20 am

      you’re too kind, Aniket. thank you so much 🙂 you are trying to fathom something in whose depths I am often lost..its a bottomless abyss

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        aniketmore said:
        November 28, 2013 at 5:27 am

        I’m glad… I have a reel in my mind that echoes *Quiet is the thought of you slowly burning through the night…* it’s so simple yet addictive!!

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    sunnyi said:
    November 16, 2013 at 3:24 am

    That’s like a haiku. 🙂 Gets to the very core with few words. Love it. 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      November 16, 2013 at 5:41 am

      haha it was meant to be a haiku, I dont know what it is now 😛 but glad to hear you enjoyed, I appreciate your kind words 🙂

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        sunnyi said:
        November 16, 2013 at 7:51 am

        You’re welcome. 🙂 Oh, I see now. Indeed. You have a whole category “haiku”… ahem. Didn’t see it, sorry. Those are especially difficult, but I really like the reduction on the essential.

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    Pendryw said:
    November 14, 2013 at 6:15 am

    Love this. Small and beautiful. Thanks for visiting my site too.

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      Himani B responded:
      November 14, 2013 at 10:53 am

      thank you Pendryw, appreciate that. I enjoyed my visit to your space too, all the very best to you 🙂

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    Noora said:
    November 13, 2013 at 2:39 pm

    Wow. Wow. Wow. LOVE this.

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      Himani B responded:
      November 13, 2013 at 8:05 pm

      many thanks Noora ♥

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    richardankerswrites said:
    November 13, 2013 at 2:53 am

    Beautiful and strangely relaxing words

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    Harsha said:
    November 13, 2013 at 1:55 am

    How do you write so meaningful and lovely Lines? 😀
    I wish if I could write like you.. 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      November 13, 2013 at 2:39 am

      you’re too sweet Harsha, thank you! I am nothing, whatever good there is, is from beyond..only the mistakes are mine 🙂

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        Harsha said:
        November 13, 2013 at 2:44 am

        And I must say again your comment make lot more sense..See I told you–You write very beautifully.. 😀

        And Yes I will take it that I am Sweet.. 😉 😛

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          Himani B responded:
          November 13, 2013 at 8:46 am

          you sure are 🙂 thank you!

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    gaylordtrotsky said:
    November 12, 2013 at 7:18 pm

    Reblogged this on The Poetry of GaylordTrotsky and commented:
    Absolutely love this one

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      Himani B responded:
      November 12, 2013 at 9:30 pm

      glad to hear that, many thanks 🙂

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    Robert said:
    November 12, 2013 at 7:09 pm

    Greetings,

    I very much like these words with this picture. Quiet, patient…

    Thank you for them.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      November 12, 2013 at 9:31 pm

      ‘quiet and patient’ .. ah yes! thats how most people describe me too, I guess once in a while it reflects in writing. Thank you Robert, appreciate your feedback, as always 🙂 all my best wishes to you

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