vague remembrance
memories
what are they
a handful of ashes
tossed in the air
slowly fading
into evening mist
…..
photograph courtesy M : http://myworldonmuteblog.wordpress.com
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memories
what are they
a handful of ashes
tossed in the air
slowly fading
into evening mist
…..
photograph courtesy M : http://myworldonmuteblog.wordpress.com
November 26, 2013 at 3:00 am
The occult behind your discourse makes me linger on this page!!! 🙂
I revere your muses!!
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November 28, 2013 at 5:25 am
glad to see you here Aniket, I visited your blog too. such rich vocabulary and gorgeous words you use to paint the canvas in your reader’s mind and heart..amazed and inspired. will read in detail next week when I have more ‘me’ time..appreciate your visit, many thanks 🙂 all the very best!
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November 28, 2013 at 5:28 am
I appreciate your time to visit my domain!! Looking forward to hear more from you! 🙂
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November 21, 2013 at 11:26 pm
I am happy you stopped by my blog, so I could find yours! I used to write a lot of poetry then I tapered off, for reasons unknown to me. Your site has reminded me of my love for poetry and I am enjoying your poems very much!
JJ
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November 25, 2013 at 8:53 pm
ah so lovely to hear that Jodi! why did you stop? please do write as it flows. it comes to me in spurts but definitely one of the best experiences. I wish you all the best, and I do hope you pen down your precious thoughts and feelings soon 🙂
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November 15, 2013 at 3:52 am
Love this, love everything on your blog
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November 15, 2013 at 7:09 pm
ah aren’t you sweet?! thank you so much dynamikrecords, appreciate that 🙂
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November 16, 2013 at 3:08 am
Yes we are 🙂 top blog.
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November 16, 2013 at 5:41 am
♥
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November 13, 2013 at 8:55 pm
Great lines !
may be you may also write about memories that dont fade.
Lemme try just for fun in your own lines if you dont mind 🙂
memories
what are they
a bunch of flowers and thorns
tossed in the air
falling back with time
few bring the smile
and few take it away
and few just perish
back on their way.
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November 14, 2013 at 10:25 am
thank you amitanshu, thats absolutely lovely! flowers and thorns, they could be too..nice perspective 🙂
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November 13, 2013 at 2:42 pm
A heartfelt piece, so beautifully composed.
“Slowly fading into evening mist”… stunning imagery, and I just love the word “mist”.
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November 13, 2013 at 7:54 pm
haha guess its one of my most favourite words too! thank you so much Noora, appreciate your kind words, as always!
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November 13, 2013 at 11:08 am
Lovely
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November 13, 2013 at 7:51 pm
thank you 🙂
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November 13, 2013 at 11:05 am
Lovely, the image really captures it perfectly.
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November 13, 2013 at 7:51 pm
thank you so much 🙂
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November 12, 2013 at 5:10 pm
Reblogged this on Freedom for Cetaceans and commented:
By Himani B
“memories
what are they
a handful of ashes
tossed in the air
slowly fading
into evening mi
Beautiful Words Himani 🙂
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November 12, 2013 at 9:33 pm
Thanks a lot Adam, happy and grateful to know you could resonate 🙂
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November 12, 2013 at 8:37 am
Memories are much more than ashes…there are those who burrow deeply in our hearts and minds, to bring a smile to us and a certain spark, to a sad or lonely day! Beautiful poem my sister!
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November 9, 2013 at 7:01 pm
Very good… Your words fit just right
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November 11, 2013 at 2:03 am
thanks a lot omtatjuan, lovely to see you here as always 🙂
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November 9, 2013 at 6:29 pm
Greetings,
Thank you for this.
Your words and this picture convey something special about all that comes…and goes.
All good wishes,
robert
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November 11, 2013 at 2:03 am
great insight there Robert about transitory state of things..thank you for dropping by..my best wishes 🙂
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November 9, 2013 at 5:33 pm
poignant,
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November 11, 2013 at 2:02 am
as long as it evokes something, its all good, I guess 🙂 thank you!
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