muted thoughts

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the madness we caress
purity in your tears
treasure in these ruins,
and the futility of those fears
is it worth it, is it worth the pain?

[pause]

enough of pain
darkness and blurred sight
come close, heed to my plight
I have burnt the blame
in a holy flame
lead me from the ashes
show me your light

h

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17 thoughts on “muted thoughts

    Laurie Merritt Photography said:
    February 7, 2014 at 9:13 am

    Hello, Himani! This post was what introduced me to you – so it’s very nice to meet you. Lovely words here. Will be watching out for more now!

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    lunachik4 said:
    November 13, 2013 at 1:10 pm

    “I have burnt the blame/in a holy flame” – beautiful refinement

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    kman768 said:
    November 6, 2013 at 10:21 am

    Tk you 🙂

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    muted thoughts | Why I Hike The Mountain said:
    November 3, 2013 at 10:20 am

    […] muted thoughts. […]

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    Jeffrey Puukka said:
    October 29, 2013 at 2:36 am

    Nicely done.

    I also actually really like that you put “(pause)”… It makes me wonder.

    -J.P.

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    rjl2727 said:
    October 24, 2013 at 1:35 pm

    extraordinary. just found your stuff and glad i did.

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    blissfilled1 said:
    October 21, 2013 at 7:06 am

    ~~ Absolutely beautiful ~~

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      Himani B responded:
      October 22, 2013 at 8:47 pm

      thanks so much blissfilled! 🙂

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    ᖘᏫℇԷᎥᘓ said:
    October 20, 2013 at 8:37 am

    Like the Phoenix, we can’t rise from the ashes unless we first start a fire! Beautiful poem dear!

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      Himani B responded:
      October 22, 2013 at 8:50 pm

      where there is fire, there is warmth. and where there is warmth, there is hope. Phoenix rising it is, poe3tic..thanks a lot!

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    Robert said:
    October 20, 2013 at 8:03 am

    Greetings,

    I like this a lot. Thank you for this poem. I sense here a journey of sorts.

    All good wishes,

    robert

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      Himani B responded:
      October 22, 2013 at 8:51 pm

      journey of twists and turns, hope and despair..thank you Robert! 🙂

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    Michael Graeme said:
    October 20, 2013 at 3:52 am

    Beautiful words. And your pictures are always equally poetic.

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      Himani B responded:
      October 20, 2013 at 4:06 am

      thanks so much Michael, appreciate your kind words. this picture of the statues has stayed with me for a long time. found the words a few days back through yet another inspiration..and click! 🙂

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    Avani said:
    October 20, 2013 at 3:43 am

    Nice.I especially liked the title. 🙂

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      Himani B responded:
      October 20, 2013 at 4:03 am

      thank you Avani 🙂

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