muted thoughts
the madness we caress
purity in your tears
treasure in these ruins,
and the futility of those fears
is it worth it, is it worth the pain?
[pause]
enough of pain
darkness and blurred sight
come close, heed to my plight
I have burnt the blame
in a holy flame
lead me from the ashes
show me your light
February 7, 2014 at 9:13 am
Hello, Himani! This post was what introduced me to you – so it’s very nice to meet you. Lovely words here. Will be watching out for more now!
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November 13, 2013 at 1:10 pm
“I have burnt the blame/in a holy flame” – beautiful refinement
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November 6, 2013 at 10:21 am
Tk you 🙂
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November 3, 2013 at 10:20 am
[…] muted thoughts. […]
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October 29, 2013 at 2:36 am
Nicely done.
I also actually really like that you put “(pause)”… It makes me wonder.
-J.P.
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October 24, 2013 at 1:35 pm
extraordinary. just found your stuff and glad i did.
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October 21, 2013 at 7:06 am
~~ Absolutely beautiful ~~
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October 22, 2013 at 8:47 pm
thanks so much blissfilled! 🙂
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October 20, 2013 at 8:37 am
Like the Phoenix, we can’t rise from the ashes unless we first start a fire! Beautiful poem dear!
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October 22, 2013 at 8:50 pm
where there is fire, there is warmth. and where there is warmth, there is hope. Phoenix rising it is, poe3tic..thanks a lot!
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October 22, 2013 at 11:14 pm
Well said 🙂 You are always welcome!
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October 20, 2013 at 8:03 am
Greetings,
I like this a lot. Thank you for this poem. I sense here a journey of sorts.
All good wishes,
robert
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October 22, 2013 at 8:51 pm
journey of twists and turns, hope and despair..thank you Robert! 🙂
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October 20, 2013 at 3:52 am
Beautiful words. And your pictures are always equally poetic.
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October 20, 2013 at 4:06 am
thanks so much Michael, appreciate your kind words. this picture of the statues has stayed with me for a long time. found the words a few days back through yet another inspiration..and click! 🙂
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October 20, 2013 at 3:43 am
Nice.I especially liked the title. 🙂
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October 20, 2013 at 4:03 am
thank you Avani 🙂
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