intimate longing

far beyond the illusion
of what they appear to be

two transparent souls, unending flow
weaving intricately, losing willingly
singing silently, caressing wildly

just a petty thought it is
.. or can it really be?

4 thoughts on “intimate longing”

johncoyote said:
July 27, 2012 at 6:15 am

I like the way you use words. Create vision and thoughts in short and powerful poetry. A amazing poem.

himani.bee responded:
July 27, 2012 at 7:12 pm

I appreciate you stopping by to read..thank youu! 🙂

himani.bee responded:
May 17, 2012 at 4:30 am

we sure do and I would like to believe that this fantasy does become a reality for the few lucky ones..

sheilapierson said:
May 17, 2012 at 2:18 am

Don’t we all want to believe it can…

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